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Up front say hello to her using her name or handle with an exclamation mark or smiley symbol and introduce yourself with great virtues no girl can reject: 'Hi Jane! I am a smart, handsome, happy guy who is passionate about the full spectrum of good living and I have a smile that you could sail on. I'd like to get to know you. Have a great day!'. Saying her name involves her straight away and means you aren't writing to yourself. Describing your virtues gives her an attractive offer that she has to accept on principle (because every girl wants a smart handsome man!). Describing how great you are shows your confidence, clear leadership vision and strength. Saying one sharp poetic thing about your features 'i have a smile you could sail on' 'darkish hair like a moonlight night' 'diamond eyes that sparkle in the sun' confirms you are smart, creative and passionate. It describes good genes. It presents a unique enticing physical offer coupled with your virtues. Saying you want to get to know her states very clearly exactly what everyone on a dating site wants without pressuring her into a formal choice. Its simply saying what you want as a start because you do not know her yet and are not going to waste valuable time thinking beyond simply getting to know her. Naturally a girl is going to write back if she too wants to get to know you and is doing so on her own accord because you have not actually asked for anything directly. You are encouraging her to be involved. In your profile mention you are seeking a naturally beautiful women. Saying 'wish you a good day!' with an exclamation mark or smiley symbol shows her your kindness, enthusiasm and thoughtfulness. It will turn her on to feel good making it far easier for her to want to respond positively. Add a wink symbol in there to show humor or just add that as a virtue if you want. A lot of guys try to be overly funny or cocky upfront and while girls certainly like a funny guy they much prefer a smart, handsome, adaptable, thoughtful guy. That represents something much stronger on an evolutionary level. Better to save teasing and jokes until you've got to know someone better. Don't disguise your intentions with online dating. Be confident in who you are and what you want.