Re: Using this- The rabbit dies opener?
Agreed with Kiesa. If you make it ridiculous, then it won't come off as aggressive. When it comes to writing humor, there's a saying I go by from a writer named William Zinser: "One word can mean the difference between making someone laugh and making them angry". It's not much different when applied to pick-up. One word or emoticon can always mean the difference between building attraction and tearing it down. Whether a certain text message will work or not all depends on the judgement of the sender.
Before you throw yourself into a worry-hole though, here goes another thing I go by in humor: No matter how good something is, there is always going to be someone out there who does not like the joke. You're always going to run into women who are outliers when it comes to pick-up. With these women, if something goes wrong, don't worry about them. They are insignificant. Just make sure you know what works for a majority of women.
"There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X