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  1. #1
    Animal Guest

    Default Flirting, feel free to critique

    Ok well here is a conversation (all names have been changed) with a girl who I met at a party one night and eventually became Facebook friends, This conversation is mostly all over FB, I hadnt talked to her since the party up until tonight. She lives in the same city as my cousin who often calls me to come party with them, I have only seen her at one party and I opened a set with her and a friend who had a huge crush on me but was now dating one of my good friends (she still wants me haha). I didn't get to talk to her much at all because me and her friend's, the one who likes me, boyfriend who is my good friend, were owning at beer pong. We were on FIRE we won like 30 some games in a row. She eventually left that party and so did I but I ended up in the ER. Lets juts say don't drink out of bottles when you get crazy drunk. But thats another story. About a month or to later I thought Id make an attempt at cultivating the seed of attraction!

    The conversation is below. Please feel free to critique it.


    Taylor's Status-> DONE WITH SchOOL!!...<TIME TO GET CRAZAAYYYYY>
    9 hours ago Comment Like
    ******* *****, ******* and 4 others like this.

    Chuck's comment-> keg stands?
    9 hours ago

    Shana's comment-> Bahhaha.. that is exactly what you do after completing school.. Keg stands!! You are brilliant!
    9 hours ago

    Trenton's comment-> congrats tay tay!
    9 hours ago

    Taylor's comment-> keg stand chuck..i never got to do another one!
    9 hours ago

    Alexandria's comment-> hahah hell ya taylor..we dominated the keg stands lol..you coming tonight
    7 hours ago

    Taylor's comment-> yes mam!
    7 hours ago

    Alexandria's comment-> haha good me too...fun night again man lol we are going be bad girls in *********** lol jk
    7 hours ago

    Taylor's comment-> yea just cover it up on here with a "jk"
    7 hours ago

    Alexandria's comment-> haha maybe...SHHHH..our secret lol
    6 hours ago

    Jerry's comment-> You two realize everyone can see this right?
    4 hours ago

    My comment-> Where's the party tonight!
    4 hours ago

    Taylor's comment-> zak.............. <--(my name)
    2 hours ago

    My comment-> taylor............
    about an hour ago

    Taylor's comment-> what makes u think id invite u? ha jp
    about an hour ago

    My comment-> Its cool I got connections! If your going where I think your going thats family to me haha (The party happened to be at my cousins house)
    about an hour ago

    Taylor's comment-> ha i was going to go ..but i kinda feel like crap so ima save up for the weekend
    about an hour ago

    My comment-> I decided against going to, its rainy and I dont have my jeep top on so.. its a no go, hit me up this weekend, Ill be partying for sure! But then agian.... why would I invite you? lol
    about an hour ago

    Taylor's comment-> rude.... lol
    about an hour ago

    My comment-> no appologies
    about an hour ago

    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    I then left to take a buddy home who was at my house watching the NBA playoff game on TV with me. When I arrived back at home I had a IM from Taylor. Here is the Instant Message conversation we had right after we had been commenting each others status.

    Taylor
    next time i see u.......ur getting hurt!

    Me
    Is that a joke or a threat? I dont know how to respond haha

    Taylor
    ummm both


    Me
    haha ok well dont hurt me to bad! How am I supposed to pick up chicks if I get beat up by one..

    Taylor
    hahahahaha

    Me
    So how has taylor been?

    Taylor
    well..good now tht schools out!!...but im sick right now :s

    Me
    yea well gratz on graduating, surprised you made it! but aw that sucks i hope you get to feeling better. I can make some killer soup. Im a pretty damn good chef

    Taylor
    well i havent graduated yet...u gonna come watch sunday?
    and dayummmm...u can make me soup!!
    and i am hungry...(even though i just ate bdubs)
    You coming to my graduation?

    Me
    ha well I doubt it I didnt even go to my ex girlfriends graduation.. haha :P

    Taylor
    horrible

    Me
    well, I was on senior trip in florida. But enough about her she cheated and i dont like cheaters haha.. I learned i deserve way way waaaay better and i have high standards now, but that is bad that i missed her graduation.. i felt bad but i had no choice i was in florida

    Taylor
    haha.ok...what are these high standards

    Me
    Why would i give my standards away? Then it be easy for a girl to lie so id like her haha

    Taylor
    oh....ummmmm....
    idk

    Me
    haha
    im just playin
    But I dno I like smart girls that are fun but still laid back, loyal, kinda good girls but with a lil bit of a bad side haha

    Taylor
    welll..im screwed..haha jpjp

    Me
    haha well yea i wasnt gna say anything but.. haha
    im just kidding! :P

    Taylor
    WOOOWWWWW

    Me
    Im kidding caaalllmm down haha

    Taylor
    im pretty laid back right now

    Me
    I know you are! Your a fun person to talk to! So ima go jump in the shower you can text me if ya want or if your still on fb when I get out we can continue our convo?

    Taylor
    okey dokey ill prob still be on..cuz idk where my phone is at the moment and plus i dont have ur #

    Me
    well I dont have your number either!

    Taylor
    god this is horrible.
    do u have ******** <--(cell phone provider i dont want to throw out free advertising haha)

    Me
    yes i do!

    Taylor
    perfection!

    Me
    Psh duh! Only the coolest have ***********

    Taylor
    yea cuz i only have like 500 text for non**********

    Me
    ok haha im showering for real this time but here is my number.. 555-555-5555
    Taylor
    ok! shower for reall

    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    After I showered I noticed she was still on Facebook but I never did message her. About 10 min later I get a text from her saying "Hey! here is my number ;]" So looks like this was a success up to this point. Now I don't know if im going to text her tonight and continue our discussion or wait for the weekend and ask her to a concert.

    Like I said before feel free to critique it add what I may have done wrong or how you would have conducted the discussion. Always willing to learn some more tips!

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    Default Re: Flirting, feel free to critique

    actually i felt like you did this pretty legit..nothing really jumped out. you showed your a prize to be won, you literally said you have standards. you have her jumping through your hoops, ur negs were on point and she was giving huge ioi's like when she strongly complies to whatv you say or do. So pretty much i would wait and ask her to a concert but plant the seed during the day for suspense before you ask her....lol then ur good, check out text game mastery, their shit is on point with text game and facebook game

  3. #3
    Animal Guest

    Default Re: Flirting, feel free to critique

    Cool cool thanks man sorry for the double post I wasn't for sure which section this should be posted in.


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