Re: I'm Impressed. Awesome first try
Also, in your profile, make sure to somehow put your "dealbreakers" or something along that line. It needs to be worded in a tactful and not rude way so girls aren't like "screw this guy". This may take some trial and error. It's not too hard, you need to figure out what you don't want in a woman and put it on your profile. If you want some ideas on how to do it, read several girl's profiles. A lot of girls put stuff like "I won't date a guy if he's not tall, dark, and handsome (200+lb girl writing this makes me laugh , see it damn often). Since i've incorporated a bit of this attitude in my profile (not as harsh or direct as women put it) i've gotten a lot more results and returned emails. On 1st and 2nd dates I have been asked by quite a few girls if they meet such and such standards on my profile, lol. It plays on their insecurities.
Hard work equals hard bodied sexy women in your life. Picking up women = putting in the time and effort go get good at it. Most naturals have put in this time and effort without it appearing as time and effort to them!