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    mxo22 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Critique my online profile

    Hi can you guys take a look at my profile and give me your opinion what to change delete add etc?

    Thanks

    mxo22

    I enjoy life to the fullest. I am a loyal and caring person to the ones I love. I have a positive attitude, always glass half full. I am intelligent and can carry on meaningful conversations.

    I am well travelled, always up for an adventure, been to 40 countries so far. Have you ever wonder how it feels to be at the Everest Base Camp in December? Or to be escorted by Military Police in Tibet? I can tell you about it ..

    I like to exercise and eat healthy, but I have my weak points (white chocolate and cheese). I have a dry sense of humor and I am told to be funny. I am persistent, I fixed my bathroom faucet leak after 4 trips to Home Depot, 5 phone calls to Moen and a bit of a water flood.

    In my free time I like to spend it friends, comedy clubs, restaurants, parties or events around town, anything fun and interesting. Summer is my favorite time of the year. Aside of my weekly crossfit schedule (new torture I started a couple months ago which I love), I belong to a run club (we meet weekly around town for 3 and 5 miles run then beer to cool down :-), play volleyball with my friends (summer league been sucking for 4 years now).

    I care about other peopleís feelings. When Iím with someone special I like being spontaneous, adventurous, romantic, surprising them with little gestures, basically having that type of fun you see two people who just met in the movies having! Iím looking for someone who has similar qualities and desires, who I can connect with.

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    PuppetMaster is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Critique my online profile

    You seem too nice... And like you're trying too hard.. Find a way to express half the points you stated with more ambiguous language to leave some mystery. Do it in an funny/entertaining way.

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    mxo22 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Critique my online profile

    Thanks man! How about this one!

    Have you ever wonder how it feels to be at the Everest Base Camp in December? Or to be escorted by Military Police in Tibet? I can tell you about it ..

    Positive attitude, intelligent and persistent. I fixed my bathroom faucet leak after 4 trips to Home Depot, 5 phone calls to Moen and a bit of a water flood.

    I have a sexy accent and here is a clue it is not Canadian :-)

    I exercise and eat right, but I have my weak points (white chocolate and cheese).

    Romantic, When Iím with someone special I like being spontaneous, adventurous. I like to have that type of fun you see two people who just met in the movies having


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