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    Exclamation Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    As usually guys all feedback is appreciated. Texting a HB8, I kinda wanted to build comfort and wanted to flirt a bit more, since I was thinking of asking her to a date.

    Me: Having fake tea with my niece, Help!! :-(

    Her: Aww that's so cute lol! Are u having fake cookies too?

    Me: Oh definitely, I am guessing your day might not be as exiting as mine :-P

    Her: I wish I was having a tea party!! I'm stuck at university from 2-10

    Me: Ohh.. fun, how's ur sars treating you btw ;-)

    Her: I'm recovering lol! It's a cold geez lol

    Me: Lol people think I am such an asshole..

    Her: No they know u joke around

    Her:

    Me: Hey now don't get so confident I am the type of guy that ur mother warned you about ;-)

    Her: Yea right! That's not true at all

    Me: Ha! I am not that easy to figure out missy, but I know ur :-D

    Her: I'm not easy to figure out lol!! Tell me how I am lol

    Me: I would rather have this conversation face to face, but what exactly do you intend on knowing

    Her: Lol u said you know me so I wanna hear what u think lol

    Her: And I know ur not a bad guy! Just trying to be bad ass lol (lol this made me laugh she was thinking if I said this I would tell her wat she's like lol)

    Me: Lol sounds like you have me figured, or you might be lying to see if I care ;-)

    Her: Who knows lol! I don't have you all figured out lol

    Me: Lol that depends if u want to know me, since I have u figured

    Her: U dont have me figured! Lol

    Her: Tell me what I'm all about lol

    Me: OK then, when I first saw you look super-normal like every girl in the crew but..

    Her: but lol?

    Me: Something gives away the fact that you're a bit wild/sassy. There's a more playful, upbeat side that you dont show, but I can totally notice it. I am guessing some people in life haven't been truthful or hurt you so its kinda hard to trust ppl.

    Her: Lol so u do know me

    Her: Wow that was pretty good

    Her: I am not wild though

    Me: Lol girls are too understand, I guess I should ask my first impressions

    Her: You try to act all tough but I know you're a softy

    Her: also you don't trust people easily

    Me: Ooh you have caught me :-P you better not unveil my personality or else..

    Her: Yea yea im gonna tell everyone now lol.. Watch out

    Me: Oh.. you asked for it get ready for a tussle terminator ;-) ( terminator=nickname)

    Her: Lol bring it on! 8-)

    Me: Whatever! You can't handle this

    Her: watch out

    Me: Lol I am going to sleep, cya later bro (around 1 am so i thought she was losing interest so I ended it)


    Again guys please leave any criticism and tell me where I messed up if I did and how I can improve. And also what are my next steps cuz I was thinking of asking to her on adate.

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    I personallly think this conversation flowed very nicely. Kudos.

    Now of course it would be awkward to suddenly ask her on a date at this point and you want to know how to transition so I understand your concerns.

    This is something I preach about A LOT. This is about qualification. The point of this is show her you are interested in her on a more deeper level and also to set you up as a challenge. This is really the smoothest way to transition from the teasing playfulness you two are at now and reach a more REAL level with her where the teasing cuts down a lot.

    Have a list of 5 things or less you want from a woman and qualify her on those things. (If you noticed you sort of already qualified her, but then went back into teasing with her. Not a bad thing, but could be if you don't escalate soon.) Then you want to have a moment like "Wow, you really are different. I need to know more about you to see if it's too good to be true." Not necessarily verbalize this, just use this as your minds filter when you interact with her.
    "All things are subject to interpretation. Whichever interpretation prevails at a given time is a function of power and not truth."

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    Yeah man I agree, I think I have built comfort and a bit of attraction but I don't know how to qualify, like totally confused so if there's another in depth thread about qualification cuz I think she kinda got uncomfortable when I said "you can't handle this" and she didn't say good night when she usually does. But yeah need help on the qualifying part.

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    props on the texting convo, you did good to keep your frame and it flowed pretty smoothly. i love how you threw the cold read in their it seemss to have worked pretty good. when you ask her out somewhere you just need to keep cool and make it sound like you just wanna hang out and do something (nonesexual of course) for instance, you could take her fishing or something but if you ask her to dinner she will see it as a date whereas hanging out with her will be more innocent and accomplish the same thing (building raport) good luck! you'll do great if your convo is as good as your texts
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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    Sorry to repost but meteroa beat me to the post

    Yeah man I agree, I think I have built Comfort and a bit of attraction but I don't know how to qualify, like totally confused so if there's another in depth thread about qualification cuz I think she kinda got uncomfortable when I said "you can't handle this" and she didn't say good night when she usually does. But yeah need help on the qualifying part.

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    I hate to be the devils advocate but I think the text was to long and plus she started thinking that you didn't have anything else to do except to text with her. Playfully she is starting to see you as just a friend and nothing more. You need to create some excitement and doubt in her mind that you are different from other guys and have a life. you need to act the part of a tough guy than just say it, like ending the text earlier on instead of texting all night. So what happened you said good night but she didn't and it created mystery in your mind why? You're trying to hard too be the Beta/Alpha male, nice guy but tough.

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    Thanks flyer I am still improving, and agree with you about her thinking I didn't have anything to do but text her. I don't know if this made a difference but I did text her different times ex 30 mins, 1hr, 15mins so I couldn't come off needy. Most people at work think I am a dick/a hole. I think I don't came off as bad boy in the text message lol even though I told her I am the type of guy ur mother...

    OK so questions would be how do I make her text me instead me having to text her also any example on creating more exciting and doubt. Thanks guys and also answer my other post

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    Bump

    Please share some insight fellas.

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    Default Re: Critique my text game and how i can improve?

    Although I am new to this site I have been in the game awhile, and in order to be mysterious and exciting you don’t need to look different or become outrageous, you can just not talk about yourself a lot and try not to do something over and over again that is noticeable. Don’t just say you are a tough guy be that person by hanging with your buds, doing other things fun and interesting, and when you text her try do it from a place where guys mostly go to have fun like playing pool or some other venue similar, and keep the texts short, and you end it first by saying “you have to go now because it’s my turn to shoot or whatever” also this establishes that you are not lying because you really will be at that venue. Or if you are at home you can say “gotta go because something came up” I’ll chat with you later. You get the point of where I’m heading with this! You have value and your time is limited! These are just suggestions but since you told her you are an alpha male (tough guy) you now have to act the part out or your credibility will be lost.

    What I've personally notice myself doing (I have a mysterious personality as some say. I do it without knowing) I usually end up trailing away from a question that is asking about myself for example what I like and what I dislike or what I like to do I would usually end up changing the subject. There aren't a lot of people who truly know what I like and dislike and all that stuff.


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