hows this for an opinion opener?

Ok so i'm working on my Approach Anxiety, and will approach as many women as I can starting tomorrow.
Came up with this for an opinion Opener...

Me "Hey can I talk to u for a second? so i'm new to the area and am looking for some cool places to hang out during the day, maybe on a lunch break or something. Where do u like to go?"

Her "yeah theres this rea
lly cool place etc..."

Me "Ok sounds great well listen I probably wont remember where that is so type in ur digits and when im strugglng to remember where this great place u mentioned is ill give u a call. Ok gota run but really nice meeting you"

Please critic this!
I was thinking it may be good to get my confidence up, most likely get a response as its not coming on too strong, I may find some good places to go and meet more women, I may get their phone number, and could even get an Instant Date out of it. Well this is what im aiming for.

As a newbie exercise designed to get you taking to people, it works. Just as well as saying "Hi" to strangers on the street, or talking to Hired Guns inside of H&M or Abercrombie.

But not "knowing" where the "cool" places are to hang out is a dlv. You're the man... who knows where everything cool is. And they had better be cool.

If you start going out every night, you'll learn about them quickly.