what do you guys think of this neg/kino escalator gambit i developed?

i just need to test it but before i do since its the first routine ive "invented" i want to hear your opinions.

this is to introduce a wing:

i think it would work better with a bigger than 2 set. the wing come in and i introduce the first girl moving to the middle just blocking my target with my back and i introduce the second girl while my target is staring at my back. after a lil time i turn back put my arm around her back/waist and go like "ohhh and this little beauty right here is XXXX" kinda like hugging her


without the wing it could be something like, after i ask her to present her friend i handshake and move giving her my back and kinda leaving her outside of the group.

is it too harsh of a neg?

i have never heard of it but if someone has done it, it was in my subconscious mind

I'm sitting on the fence on this one. Introducing the target as an afterthought is cool but turning your back on her, am not so sure man. I mean, I don't do it with buds as it's a tad impolite, what more to a girl? I think this could make your target go after your wing instead, hehe. I dunno.

If you're handsome enough, or command a presence, or turn out to be real charming and engaging, we will forgive you this slight.

If you're not, sorry, but you've just really annoyed and offended us.