im going to tear you a new one ok? its just tough love and its going to make you grow a lot and develop faster, since im going to be harsh you will remember it and work at it harder.
asking for help has never been pathetic. NEVER, not asking and staying a loser would make you a pathetic grub. It seems like you are immature, grow up and become a farking man already.
you are not only failing here in the text part of pick up, you are failing in other areas too. some people get so focused on farking numbers that when they get them they feel validated. then they cant do sh1t with them. Next time try to work the girls enough so that text is nothing but a comunication tool and not a pick up tool. Dont get focused on the farking number, get focused on a kiss. If you do your sh1t properly you would score.
who the fark tells a girl that he picked many others? you thats who. Dont farking tell her about lots, if you want to show her you are not needy, wait a day or two before texting to setup a date. you dont want to make her feel like you went there to get #s, she got to know you went to have fun, if you want to show you have plenty of woman tell her how this one girl was all over you. Do so later in the convo not in the farking second text.
use nicknames, be fun, she gotta have something in her mind that makes her remember you were the one, the highlight of the night. dont be another boring pretty face.
you were so farking Zeta on that exchange dude, dont and i repeat, DONT COMPLIMENT HER. you are giving her value while you arent getting any yourself.
be the man, have fun and have them remember you for anything amazing/funny/different you did. right there in your exchange you were just another AFC.
Good luck dude, if you want help and you want some suggestions let me know.