so here started a convo with a girl on myspace and i need ur help before i fark up again.
me: Hey B
I'm new in the area and just thought to meet new people, I read about you in your profile and you seem to be a fun person. Hit me back 
SleekB.
her: Heyy SleekB
hows it going?where abouts did u move into?aww,thanks,haha .
im thinking writing this:
you know, saving damsels in distress, dodging bullets, the usual lol and i moved to X, love the new place, the view is amazing from the floor i live at, close to the mall, sport recs and lots of nice people. you live in the area or you are some bum on the street logging in from a cafe 
what do you think? i feel like thats too much but we will see what u guys think