Hey guys I want your opinion on my idea.
Just a quick backstory..... She just broke up with her bf of 5 years ( she even went to therapy to deal with her struggle of breaking up and the aftermath)... She rebounded with an Overly clingy guy and broke it off..... She doubts herself, gets lonely, sad, but says she should remain single and "find herself".
I know she likes me but has doubts about herself and feels emotionally drained.she has known me for over a year.... My idea is to reframe myself and take her to something exciting that she likes ( I usually dress casual .... I want to dress up super slick and take her gun shooting... I'll look different and a bit like James Bond.... Funny yes, but it will look good and I can use that as a joke too... Call her my octopussy or something).
After the gun shooting adrenaline I want to Kino escalate, hug, then look into her eyes and say "Hey "(nickname I've given her). I want you to listen, understand and don't interrupt.. I've been thinking about what you've said. How you struggle with the darker lonelier thoughts and feelings. I know how it is. It's easy to think that way because it provides a defense mechanism for safety and comfort. But the desire to be happy and excited is there . It's always there. And you deserve it. But it's scary because it's different and unknown and mysterious. But don't you want to give in sometimes? Take a risk and see if embracing the unknown makes you feel good?".... The whole time doing Kino Escalation and compliance testing.... Then gonin for the kiss after I say what I say.
Any critiques on the setup and the wording? I feel what I wrote to say might be lengthy but I think it's emotionally hypnotic(especially with the kino compliance stuff. Would love to hear your guys opinions... Both positive and negative... And all critiques are welcomed.
Hope you guts can help an aspiring seductor land this HB9 for dating purposes.