First Pick-Up EVER! Please review my performance

Greetings!

My name is EdBoy and I've been studying the art of pick-up since I first found out about it in 10th grade. I'm now a freshmen in college and I recently had my first lay and I'd like some feedback on how I can improve.

It was the third day in my Music Appreciation class and on the first and second day I realized there really weren't too many attractive women in the class, so I wasn't expecting much. Shortly after taking my seat, a fair skinned brunette girl with a full chest and big thighs walks into the class room. I admit, in the face she was average but her body is what really made me want her. I've always followed the 5 second rule, so after seeing her walk in and take her seat, I wasted no time in pursueing her. I admit, I was nervous as HELL and I had no idea what to say. So me being an inexperienced noob I walk up to her and I say "Hey do you know a girl named Shaqweeta" and she giggles and answers "No, why" then I reply "Me either, hi I'm EdBoy". She laughed I guess because the name I picked was ridiculous, but it was the only Opener I could think of so cut me some slack x) so we're talking and I'm doing almost no Kino and after class she comes up to me and asks me for my number. My phone didn't work at the time though so I told her to just message me on facebook... Friday night she messages me with a short "hi" so I reply "Damn if you keep writing long messages like that we might not be able to talk much longer" then she writes "lmfao you're funny. What're you up to". I then replied "Just reading some stuff online. When are you gonna let me take you out girl? I just got paid so you can get anything you want off the dollar menu" she replies "Well my roommates are out of town this weekend, you can come over if you want". I was shocked because I really didn't game her up AT ALL but hey I wasn't complaining. So she stops by my place, we go to her house and I had officially gotten my first lay hahha.

What I want to know though is since I didn't necessarily game her up, was it just that she was an easy ass girl or did I do something right here? Hahaha.

Well, it sounds like she gamed you. You managed not to ruin the opportunity, great job.

dude, awesome story. I think you both gamed each other, but you def kicked it off with that Opener, thats like the best cheezy opener ever. But openers arent supposed to be smooth they are just to get the girls attn. your cocky/funny is kinda stealth, its good man, keep it up.

I liked how you fixed her short "hi" and made your intentions clear. I'm still new to this, but even I see you got some points there.

Even the biggest AFC gets his occasional lay. However your having more succes then I have, so kudo's.