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Unread 05-20-2013, 09:37 PM
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Default Just updated my profile section on POF

I deleted my old low value somewhat AFC profile and replaced it with this. I would like some helpful feedback on what I just put up. Here it is.

I've always had a love hate relationship with vegetables. When I was about six years old I wrestled a turnip. Big deal you say. Well it was a giant turnip. Then along came a cauliflower. Then broccoli. Then a few years later a giant tomato came after me. However, I was prepared this time with a kitchen knife in one hand and a fork in the other. I've eaten my veggies ever since. These days they don't give me a hard time. Fruit on the other hand is another story. I sometimes have issues with strawberries, peaches, pineapple etc. However, if you have some melons for me I might be ok with that.


Let me know what you guys think of this. I know it's a bit on the short side. What should I take out or add(if anything). Also, is the melon thing a bit too much or does it sound cheesy? I like it and think it adds some sexual innuendo but do you think women might think it's cheesy or corny or whatever. Thanks.



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Default Re: Just updated my profile section on POF

What is a pof? I hear people talking about it a lot

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POF equals Plenty of Fish which is an online dating website.

Some guys on here say they have had a lot of success with it. However, it seems to me that just about every woman on there is looking for a relationship. So I'm not sure I should even bother since I'm not really looking for anything serious right now.


 
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It might be funny and cute but, it doesn't display any value or why the girls should be talking to you.

btw, I've seen some women use profiles like this lately....


 
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Thanks for the criticism. However, in my defense it doesn't do what most guys profiles do. Most guys will write things like "Hi, I'm Joe. I like Nascar, baseball, beer, hanging out with friends, working out at the gym....blah blah blah."

Also, you are wrong. It does say why women should talk to me. The thing is it says it indirectly by me being fun. The fact that I'm a fun guy who doesn't take this stuff seriously is why they should talk to me.

That said, there's room for improvement. I would like to know specifically how I could make it better. Don't just say "it shows no value" or "it's lacking something." Tell me what I should add specifically if possible and give an example. Thanks.


 
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Default Re: Just updated my profile section on POF

Have you noticed a change since the new profile? I.e more messages/interest from women?


 
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No, but that's only because I haven't messaged anyone yet. I still need to put a picture up. I figured I would post the updated part here and see what you guys think before messaging anyone.


 
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I created one. It's actually very interesting

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Just now? Before you acted like you had no idea what it was. Lol.


 
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Default Re: Just updated my profile section on POF

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Originally Posted by Mystik View Post
POF equals Plenty of Fish which is an online dating website.

Some guys on here say they have had a lot of success with it. However, it seems to me that just about every woman on there is looking for a relationship. So I'm not sure I should even bother since I'm not really looking for anything serious right now.
I've also noticed this. talked to lots girls on there, but met and fark only 2. have to say though the ammount of stuck up 'princesses' and girls who only like to shop see friends and party on there makes me wanna delete the profile


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