01-14-2013, 11:18 PM
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| | Re: Need help with OKC profile
I'm going to lay my honest opinion on you. Take it with a grain of salt and be true to yourself but here's my opinion.
Your first two pictures are no good. I don't know what it is but you look really old in them. Probably just lighting etc. And the one of you next to the chevy looks pretty cheesy. The plaid shorts with running shoes combo is not very stylish. The picture of you and a bunch of dudes doesn't really scream "I have options" either. The wakeboarding picture is cool. Also the route 66 drag stip pictures can work.
The first two sentences of your self-summary sound exactly like a stereotypical online profile. My name is bryce, I'm twenty, I do this.... It's kind of like what the military would write about you. Be creative and try to write some short stuff that hooks a reader. I know it's a pain in the ass but your name age and serial number aren't really who you are right?? What makes you you?? Communicate that.
The parts about how you love to work on your car are pretty good. Keep that where it is but throw some more interesting/creative stuff in at the beginning. There's lots of good advice on how to make a profile on this forum as well as examples so follow that.
Also, make sure you're meeting girls in person! I seem to have more luck that way anyways
Good luck homie! You are on the path!