Online dating profile example

ok well i have seen some guys put their profiles up here to critique and personally i think its ok to just describe yourself but you need to stand out, seem fun, playful and really peak her curiousity about you. not only that but you need some fun pictures to show u have a fun life. i have like 2 good pictures of me just looking good, 3 of me travling and 2 of me partying. one is taking a beer bong and the other is a cheers with a bomb shot!

ok well here is an example of my profile. give me advice. i think it might help.

Who am I?...I am Spiderman....wait that was a movie! Hola! Im Chris and yes thats about the extent of my spanish! And for some reason i wish they had a "How to write your plenty of fish bio for dumbies book." :P I just moved to Golden for schooling. I am a complete goofball and random. I like to have fun and am usually smiling..i have heard its a little contagious! I am new to this area and I am trying to find some fun high quality people to hang out with and be around. I like to think the people that somebody has around them tells you a little about themselves.

I may seem like a frat boy or something from my pictures but i guarantee I am more than that! Tell me if you believe me after the first time we talk...if you have time to make a quick message and are willing to be silly. I do drink socially and if thats a dealbreaker then it was nice to have met (well kind of) i guess you had a nice read!! But i do believe in having fun whether its having a couple of shots and funny cheers moments with friends, to sitting in one of those oddly comfortable lawn chairs gathered around a table playing spades and talking.(or go-fish...i will kick ur butt in go-fish). I am quite sarcastic and feisty! So if you dont mind having some fun sarcasm, then im more than welcome to see how quick you are on your feet!

If you read this far and want to talk, why not?!? I talk to random people all the time. There's nothing to it and its damn good fun usually!



so this took a little time but not much at all. if you guys like it then here is an example and if not tell me why not. i mean im not perfect at online game but it hasnt hurt me so far. most of my closes are first or second nights with them!

I like the "I talk to random people all the time" line. I might plagiarize that. It's funny, projects confidence, and says that you're social. Since I made mine about freakin' pirates I have been doing better. I guess the key goal is this: Don't write about your hobbies, music choices, or anything else typical. Substantiate your personality with a cool profile, but leave everything else to Mystery. Also, I was just wondering, have you tried OkCupid? I like that site a lot because there's a ton of chicks on it. It's even got a real girly theme. Sucks girl in.

haha i do. but its the same. since i made this one it just reads really confident, leaves me as a Mystery and makes them curious about me and just is totally fun.

I like your profile ex, it is really good and clear

haha thnx bud. i think its pretty clear, confident and doesnt mix words. pretty much an alpha message while also displaying that im fun and different. haha its funny i already saw a guy with a profile pretty much just like mine. hahaha its great when guys are doing what u do cause it works. i have been messaged by plenty of girls about my profile! its usually something like "hey cutie ur profile was funny and i wanted to talk to you!" haha

My current header.
"Beauty is nice to look at, but does not impress me"
I have been playing with this for a while and have been getting a lot more interest now that I have changed it. Thanks for the profile tips now I see mine as AFC and need to make it PUA.

i guess there's nothing wrong with online dating.

I have a good opening message... gets a great response rate... curious to what you guys think. Here it is:


I am cute and honest....
... And not emailing you just for the hell of it.
I find it weird to introduce yourself through an email... It is not like I can honk, whistle, or flirt with you running on the treadmill the gym(or someother place she's always at). Nope. Not like that at all.
I rarely respond profiles but something about your profile jumped out- so I thought I'd say "Hi".
Maybe it was because of your pretty smile? Or because I tend to gravitate towards reformed social butterflies who aren't into clubbing and bar scenes anymore, and I HATE games too( a few things in her profile) Naturally it got me wondering if you have the same attitude... the same energy...
... and am sure you have gotten plenty of emails from plenty of dudes named Chad that say, "Hi! I like long walks on the beach, cuddling, and wine." Who doesn't, right? If you didn't like that stuff something would be wrong with you.Yawn. Imagine spending for the rest of your life with that? I know, right?
If you are interested shoot me a message and tell me something crazy that happened this weekend... If not, have fun with Chad - D

Okcupid has worked for me, somewhat. I'm 30 something and I've gone on dates with over 50 gals since March of this year.

Now, most of those dates were failures because of my not knowing how to flirt, escalate, talk etc. That's why I'm here.

On the flip side I've at least gotten laid from the site by an 18 year old, a 19 year old, and a gal my age.

I just wish id known about this site here BEFORE all of those dates.