Is this a good pof profile? help me out i suck at this

i have been trying the web site POF(plenty of fish) because my friend told me he had hooked up with a lot of girls on it, so i have been trying my luck. I have not been getting a lot of hits. I think it could be two reasons
1) my profile is not doing me justice
2) bad openers
I figure i would try to fix the bio problem first, so be be as brutal as you guys want I am not afraid of criticism.

so the first box said ABOUT ME

"Well for starters I like pina coladas and long walks on the beach. I am brand spanking new to Ct and will be moving to Bethel in a few weeks. I am from Bronx, New York, I hope Ct can compare lol. I'm looking to make new friends to help me explore my new environment. I'm up for pretty much anything from tearing up the clubs to chilling and watching a few movies."

the next box is first date

"Well for a first date i like to keep it simple; you know I don't wanna take a person i barely know out of their Comfort zone. Coffee and a walk park or lunch and a movie ect. however that doesn't mean i'm not up for any thing more exciting; Sky diving on the first date i'm game lol"

so let me know what you think. Thanks.

I'm kind of fortunate because my job get's me some periodic responses, but for the most part, you have to make the approach.

My favorite free dating site is OkCupid.com. I hope this isn't considered advertising, because I'm not trying to send a bunch of PUA's there. Don't want the competition...LOL.

Datehookup is ok, but PoF rates pretty low in my opinion. I only use dating sites when I'm bored though... I'd rather be out sarging.

As far as online dating goes... OkCupid has posted a bunch of their studies at blog.okcupid.com - check out their all posts section. Things that have been talked about here is this.

1. Guys rate women by their pic's... Women rate men by their profiles and messages. Moral of the story, read a chicks profile and send them a message about something you found interesting in their profile. Also, I'm not sure that women care to be told how hot their pics are, they get that all of the time. They want to know that a guy finds them interesting, so do something a little different from the norm. Also, HB's already know their hot and need to be brought back to reality a little (read up on Mysteries neg theory). Average chicks are going to believe you and think that you are just trying to get down their pants and will probably not respond.
2. Grammar. A lot of women are more interested in someone who can carry on a decent and intellectual conversation, so skip the U R a QT.
3. Be creative and humorous. Chicks love a guy who can make them smile and laugh. Don't forget to ask open ended questions to give them a reason to respond... Hey wazzup? is not the open ended question that I'm talking about.
4. Find something that you're passionate about and make your profile revolve around that. Even if the chick does not share your passion, the fact that your life has some sense of importance to you evokes a type of fascination in chicks. Since I'm a dance instructor, I always talk about teaching and performing. I can't tell you how many times I've told a chick how much I've learned about life through my understanding of dance.. Lead and follow, rhythms, patterns, ebb and flow, the dynamics and style of music, the symphony of life, connection with your partner, and general sensuality. It can be complete bullsh1t (which it's not in my case) and the ladies will still dig it. Fascination, Mystery, and intrigue. Dare to be different and have meaning in your life.

I guess that's about all that comes to mind. I have been known to use canned messages, and even if I'm caught... it doesn't matter because if they respond with 'are you using a templated message?' I've got the conversation started.


If you want to be successful with online dating, the biggest thing is just to stay active with it and sort out what isn't working from what is working, but I still suggest developing your real life sarging skills. It's much more fun!


Peace and Good Luck,

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