Were did i f up?

Ok i was talking to a girl on POF and it seemed to going good but then she stoped responding. can you guys tell were i F-ed things up?

ok i used this Opener i saw on an other thread.
"hey, so do you have a job? I need a woman who can support me while I play video games
all day"

She said:
"I really hope thats a joke lol"

Me:
"Wow, your pretty, but NO sense of humor, huh?"

her:
"Thanks haha I do! but ive had that said to me before and it wasnt a joke"

Me:
"Oh i see your like an ex-video game junkie and can't be around someone
who play them, despite him being awesome, because your'll relapse, gain
20 pounds and ever go outside. I knew it would not work, curse these
website giving false hope....."

her:
"Lollll you got me so youre pretty awesomee huh?"

this is were i think i F-ed up. i believe this is a Sh1t Test but wasn't sure.

"You will have to figure the answer to that your self. I don't have any
tattoos or piercings(thats something in her profile) I'm clean as a whistle and i'm against them,
unless they are awesome. So is yours awesome because its a deal breaker
for me "

I was gonna rap it up after that but she never gave me the chance

I think you farked up by think that by using some kind of line instead of a genuine original idea. Forgive me if I'm mistaken. You should be careful when you make up assumptions with women, even if it is just a joke, the slightest upset and you get labeled as a complete ass. I got too admit the Opener is kinda funny as long as you can rebound from seeming like a nobody to someone that has something going for him. Too much dlv. Playing video games isn't the problem Xbox Live has like 9 million subscribers, and World of Warcraft alone has like 12 million. And honestly girls find them fun as sh1t too, I actually meet one of my Exgf at a party when she was kicking everyone's ass at halo. It was love at first sight lol.
Anyways you always need to dhv, the average girl has at least 5 different guy hitting on her at one time, and always has options. So you always have to show your the best choice. Just showing that you potential is enough for most women to be interested. If you're going to use your opener on another girl pick a hobby/habit that's more exciting. Like "Hey, so do you have a job? Because I need someone to help support my Basejumping habit, Don't worry I'll make sure the life insurance pay off is worth it!" This implies the same kind of humor with the same approach, but makes you seem adventurous and a risk taker. And implies a minimum of a $500,000 pay off if you end up killing yourself.

i mos def agree that i should tweak that Opener alil to add some DHVs.
she started to respond i just anxious if a girl takes long to reply i gotta work on that. i could wrap it up but im not sure wat do you thing?

she replied: I only have one tattoo I like it couple piercings nose tongue and upper lip I think they are pretty awesome

me:
what is the tattoo of or is that too personal of a question? I would
get a tattoo but i'm not sure what i would get. It would have to be
awesome naturally. What would you suggest? Perhaps a butterfly on my
lower back lol
her:
Thats what I have jkjk I have "set your heart free" on my wrist.. Youre funny
me:
Lol almost had me tramp stamps are a big deal breaker for. See that is
a cool tattoo did you come up with that and does it have good story
behind it? I feel like all tattoos need a good story behind it and if
it doesn't you need to make one up lol.

P.S.
Life is short why not laugh. Don't you agree?

her:
I did come up with it to me its kinda is a reminder to be open about my feelings always speak up.. Prob wondering how that makes any sense haha but it does to me and you are absolutely right I love to laugh

Should i close or continue to talk with her. i feel confident that i could keep on talking, but i don't wanna miss my chance of getting a number/date

omg srry for all the typos. im kinda nervous now i don't wanna F this up she is an HB8-9

Thanks, i see what you mean. I failed, but at least i learn from it. It won't happen anymore