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  1. #1
    zylev is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default 3 year absence from the game: My POF Profile needs proofread

    pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?pro file_id=27562073

    Here's my completed profile, alot of you deserve credit for lines in it:
    Warning! I apply to only a certain type of girl, are you her?
    I'm a sociopathic hedonist. I'm a proud, arrogant intellectual and I always demand my way. The only time my mouth isn't used to exert my two-cents is after I am pleased. I rarely drink before 9 am and my Psychiatrist says I have potential. I no longer put up with petty drama nor emotional hysterics. I talk dirty, work dirty, and play rough.

    I do what I want, when I want.
    I regularly talk to strangers, particularly when they exude a positive energy like mine. I reserve my Saturday nights for cigars and drinks with my guys.

    Not shallow but lacking a slender or fit body-type is a deal-breaker.
    Don't message me if you don't have a job or developing a career.
    Do you know the difference between They're, There, and Their? How about You're and Your? Good, go ahead and message me then.

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    zylev is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: 3 year absence from the game: My POF Profile needs proofread

    I changed it. I am more comfortable with this "About Me"

    Garr me be a pirate!
    The humblest and romanticalest type.

    I spend m'days in the clearest blue seas plundering secret booty and frequently I must outwit and outgun the toughest cutthroats with me scallywags! Naysay I be drinking rum when I have me landlegs!

    Avast! The rest me spare times aspent strumming tunze that be pleasin' to the passing mermaids, albeit they be deadly creatures to tangle with! Otherwise I make me a good hammock and dream of tropical islands with flowery she-natives, or new ways to plunder buried treasure!

    Perhaps ye be lucky enough a landlubber to meet such a suave swashbuckler as me?
    You can bet yer petticoats' silver buckles that I bathe me vessel, freshen up m'galley and rub some bloomin' daisys on me forecastle and jibb.

    M'fine lady, do not pass up an o'pportunitee such as this. I sail the highest seas looking for the best of adventure, and me next ship voyage into the sunset may be m'last!

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    Allen705 is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Re: 3 year absence from the game: My POF Profile needs proofread

    I like the first, but it's a tad bit abrasive, maybe tone it down? The sociopath part and maybe the psychiatrist part maybe leave out. There are enough of those out there, without red flagging yourself. lol

    The second umm...leave it up for a few days...maybe a week and see what happens. Doesn't mean you can't change it daily, or weekly. Hell I have rewritten, edit mine almost daily.

    What does everyone think, about adding the laundry list of girls I don't want. I have that in mine...so does zylev. Is it better to drop all that, and let all the crazies come to you and find out, or is it better to leave that wall up? I like to leave the wall up.

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    WhiteRanger is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: 3 year absence from the game: My POF Profile needs proofread

    How many messages do you get a day from the 2nd profile?


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