There's two dating sites I'm on. I tried different things to my profiles, but nothing seems to work. But I want someone to take a look at my profiles. I get some views, but I can't seem to draw that attraction level. This is how my profiles are layed out currently. This is an example of how my about me is layed out on both pages.
"He, what's oben? And yes that is the extent of my German besides guten tag. If you don't know what these words mean, Google them. I'm loyal, sarcastic, and a passionate man who likes to have a good time and laugh no matter where I'm at. In my mind is well education and creativity. One of my most favorite places is a beach on a warm sunny day with plenty of open water and sand on the shore. I'm looking for a beautiful woman who is loyal and fun. Someone who is different from the rest. As long as you're not a woman who's about drama like some twisted scene in a drama show, you'll have no problems getting along with me. My time is valuable and I don't settle for less. life is too short. Also don't let my looks fool you. I'm straight forward and not afraid to tell a woman what I want out of life because I am a man! Not some poor little boy who acts like a wuss towards a woman. I'm not disclosing too much only because that would ruin the fun and mystery of getting to know more about me".
As far as emails I'm usually the one who initiates contact. I'll just give an example of what I write when I email an attractive woman who catches my interests.
"Hey. What's up? I think you're cute. I like your profile. It gives me the
impression that you're a genuine woman. I see you like to laugh too. The best
remedy for staying positive I think. certainly better than to be some gloom bug or a
drama liama. Lol! As far as your first date suggestion, that is romantic! That
alone tells me you have an idea of what romance is, which is an important quality to
have in a relationship. So what's your name and what else can you tell me about
yourself that's not in your profile? By the way, I'm Michael. It's nice to meet
I want to see what my mistakes are in all fields even if one of them happens to be the screen name I use. I want to be myself, but at once I want to get better at this. It's been my long life dream to greatly improve with attracting women online. If you see this and have suggestions, don't hesitate to reply.