Can you critique my OKCupid profile? I just made this yesterday so I know it needs a lot of work. It's too long at least. I want it to be true to me but still prompt a lot of responses. I DON'T consider myself to be a PUA and I'm totally new to all of this sh1t. But help me out, man!
www . okcupid . com/profile/NotTooBadCupid (remove the spaces)
I read Window Shopping for Women but that book doesn't talk much about profiles at all because it was written before the online dating craze (in fact, it focuses on Myspace...)
Any tips at all, please, please, please.