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    NTBCupid is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Critique my OKC Profile!

    Hey,

    Can you critique my OKCupid profile? I just made this yesterday so I know it needs a lot of work. It's too long at least. I want it to be true to me but still prompt a lot of responses. I DON'T consider myself to be a PUA and I'm totally new to all of this sh1t. But help me out, man!

    www . okcupid . com/profile/NotTooBadCupid (remove the spaces)

    I read Window Shopping for Women but that book doesn't talk much about profiles at all because it was written before the online dating craze (in fact, it focuses on Myspace...)

    Any tips at all, please, please, please.

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    Default Re: Critique my OKC Profile!

    Almost 8 feet tall ? LOL

    I hope it's a joke. :P

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    Default Re: Critique my OKC Profile!

    Of course it's a joke. So is most of the other stuff on that column.

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    Default Re: Critique my OKC Profile!

    Quote Originally Posted by NTBCupid View Post
    Of course it's a joke. So is most of the other stuff on that column.
    Yeah i kinda got that, was just teasing you.

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    Default Re: Critique my OKC Profile!

    It seems a bit over the top. I understand a little bit of humor but theres a right way n a wrong way to do it. I also think the picture of you should be a little bit more expressive of you. Maybe out doors with some friends, or you with some women.
    "I've never seen anyone pull as quickly or as efficiently as you"
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    Default Re: Critique my OKC Profile!

    Updated some stuff. Maybe it's a little better now?


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