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    bb75 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Crit my online profile...

    Thanks guys - looking for some feedback on my profile. I'm reasonably recently single so kind of new to this. I initially wrote a warm and fuzzy one - it got some interest but not much that I was interested in. So let me know what you think of this one...

    I'm based in Hong Kong...
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    靚女

    Congratulations on finding the most awesome profile on Lovestruck! This is truly where all the magic happens

    If you've found this profile all by yourself then you've demonstrated precisely the kind of initiative that should take you far in this world and you're also in possession of a reasonably impressive set of balls. Give yourself a pat on the back and a silver star.

    If you've arrived here because I winked or messaged you then you've taken an important first step - but only the first step remember - so that's only a bronze star. No pat on the back yet - that comes later

    I know exactly what I want from life and I know how to get it. I'm smart enough to know better, bad enough to want to do it all over again and cute enough to get away with it.

    Now I could be the kind of guy who "likes puppies and small children, long walks on the beach and wants to make friends and maybe something more if it happens".

    If you want that then move along to the next profile.

    Remember a gold star awaits

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    bb75 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Crit my online profile...

    So guys - I went with following profile - been getting lots of iNterst in the 30+ market but I'm really looking for the 25-30 girls...

    Kudos to some of the other guys for their lines.

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    Congratulations on finding the most awesome profile on XXX. This is where all the magic happens

    If you've found this profile all by yourself then you've demonstrated precisely the kind of initiative that should take you far in this world - give yourself a pat on the back and a silver star.

    If you've arrived here because I winked or messaged you then you've taken an important first step - but only the first step remember - so that's only a bronze star. No pat on the back yet - that comes later.

    Now I could be the kind of guy who "likes puppies and small children, long walks on the beach and wants to make friends and maybe something more if it happens".

    If you want that then move along to the next profile.

    Or I could be none of the above - but that's where the fun comes in.

    Of course the subtext to this preamble is my counterpart post on Craigslist which goes something like this...

    "I'm a romantically gifted stud searching for a bored tycoon's daughter who will lavish me with expensive gifts in return for putting some genuine excitement into her life. Car must be provided up front."

    I know exactly what I want from life and I know how to get it. I'm smart enough to know better, bad enough to want to do it all over again and cute enough to get away with it

    So the question is - are you cool, sexy and fun enough to find out?

    Remember a gold star awaits ***

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    bb75 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Crit my online profile...

    For the hotter girls I'm messaging I'm sending them a - "congratulations you've been carefully selected to move to the next stage of the audition process."

    When they reply - I've been thinking of sending them something like this...

    "This is an automated response.*

    Thank you for your interest in applying to date XXX. As we're sure you can appreciate we receive many applications for this position so it may take us a little time for our expert panel of judges to respond, but we will as soon as possible.*

    And remember - this is where the magic happens "

    Any thoughts?


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