Recently I ended a relationship with an ex and I'm trying to get back in to the dating game. I started going online and have pretty much ruined my chances on POF by message flooding all the hot women in the local area.
Now what happens is that I get looked at by the woman that I've emailed, a positive sign of sorts but then they seldom reply. Most of my messages are direct to the point and must be working, I assume if I've had my profile viewed and so I'm guessing it has been my profile which has been the problem more than anything else....
Any hows, here is my profile, I have only just updated it with ideas taken from here and other PUA Forums, please let me know how much it stinks....
"Who am I? I'm Spartacus.. nope, I'm Maximum Decimus Meridius... nope, not me either, instead I'm Dave.
Well, that's my name anyhows and the answer that people that I know would give to the following questions:
Who's fun? 'Dave'..... Who's genuine? 'Dave'... Who is most likely to think that having a juggling penguin would be the Ultimate All Time Winner on Britain's Got Talent? 'Dave'
It isn't really who I am though, is it? Questions that need to be asked to sum that up are 'What am I about?' and 'What do I like doing?'.
So... what am I about?
Well, if I'm not chatting to random people, getting to know them, or being silly, then I'm a law graduate who is working his way on to earning thousands of pounds so that I can fund my Penguin Juggling School. I would love to have one of those, with my own personal army of penguins, well who wouldn't? Isn't that the ultimate accolade to say that you were the first person to establish one?
What do I enjoy doing?
I like taking chances with life, I like seeing where I can get to with every day that I'm given. Every day I wake up is a potential exciting adventure ahead of me and right now I'm looking for someone to join me on that trip.
Now, by this point you might be thinking that I'm crazy and that's all that I have to give. But trust me, it is only part of it, the rest you will see when you take a chance to get to know me. Message me and I promise that you won't be disappointed. If you are, I will buy you a drink when we meet up, that sound like a fair deal?"
What do you think? Do I need lessons about getting this right, would I even scrape any kind of pass? Oh and I realise that the end part is almost supplication but it's done with the purpose that they would have to get to meet me to get the drink and once they meet me, then the online profile has served it's purpose and it's down to my daily game to succeed.