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    Dave-o is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default My online profile, by dave-o

    Recently I ended a relationship with an ex and I'm trying to get back in to the dating game. I started going online and have pretty much ruined my chances on POF by message flooding all the hot women in the local area.

    Now what happens is that I get looked at by the woman that I've emailed, a positive sign of sorts but then they seldom reply. Most of my messages are direct to the point and must be working, I assume if I've had my profile viewed and so I'm guessing it has been my profile which has been the problem more than anything else....

    Any hows, here is my profile, I have only just updated it with ideas taken from here and other PUA Forums, please let me know how much it stinks....

    "Who am I? I'm Spartacus.. nope, I'm Maximum Decimus Meridius... nope, not me either, instead I'm Dave.

    Well, that's my name anyhows and the answer that people that I know would give to the following questions:

    Who's fun? 'Dave'..... Who's genuine? 'Dave'... Who is most likely to think that having a juggling penguin would be the Ultimate All Time Winner on Britain's Got Talent? 'Dave'

    It isn't really who I am though, is it? Questions that need to be asked to sum that up are 'What am I about?' and 'What do I like doing?'.

    So... what am I about?

    Well, if I'm not chatting to random people, getting to know them, or being silly, then I'm a law graduate who is working his way on to earning thousands of pounds so that I can fund my Penguin Juggling School. I would love to have one of those, with my own personal army of penguins, well who wouldn't? Isn't that the ultimate accolade to say that you were the first person to establish one?

    What do I enjoy doing?

    I like taking chances with life, I like seeing where I can get to with every day that I'm given. Every day I wake up is a potential exciting adventure ahead of me and right now I'm looking for someone to join me on that trip.

    Now, by this point you might be thinking that I'm crazy and that's all that I have to give. But trust me, it is only part of it, the rest you will see when you take a chance to get to know me. Message me and I promise that you won't be disappointed. If you are, I will
    buy you a drink when we meet up, that sound like a fair deal?"

    What do you think? Do I need lessons about getting this right, would I even scrape any kind of pass? Oh and I realise that the end part is almost supplication but it's done with the purpose that they would have to get to meet me to get the drink and once they meet me, then the online profile has served it's purpose and it's down to my daily game to succeed.

    Thanks

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    Dave-o is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: My online profile, by dave-o

    Ok, that profile has been ripped up... generating no interest, cringeworthy and has been replaced by one which was inspired by the Bravo PUA Online video.

    One of the most important aspects of any profile and this is something that I'm working on is getting the first 2 sentences to be the bait. When women view the list of guys, they will see the opening couple of sentences of your profile and if it's crap, why would they even look at your profile, never mind message you?

    I'm experimenting at the moment, my key weakness being that I might need to get the POF site to re-populate as I exhausted the number, and probably helped all the real PUA, with really lame approaches and shocking profile, to the point where I recognise all the women that I would otherwise approach and then I'm left with no 8s, 9s or 10s to message and I'm not going lower than an 8, why would I?

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    That first post is super tryhard man. Think alpha. You seem like you're trying to impress this girl you've never met by sending in your resume. Keep the message short, like 2-4 sentances long. Realize that the hot chicks get like 100's of messages a day, no joke. Short, but also eye catching.

    It's literally like picking up girls in person: "Hey I really like that x in your photo, where did you get it? My sister's birthday is coming up and I want to buy one for her."

    Or do something completely unconventional: ***FREE STARBUCKS COUPON*** Good for one secretaznman to bring along on a date to NYC Starbucks. Rules and restrictions may apply. Coupon expires x/xx/xx

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    Dave-o is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: My online profile, by dave-o

    Is this any better....

    Little bit about myself... Law graduate, wannabee rock climber who wants to plant a flag at the summit of life whilst also stopping every now again to breathe in the air and take in the views
    Returned back to the online scene but getting tired of all the repeated lines, LOLs and all the women lacking that essential ingredient....FUN!
    Guess I'm looking to see if there are any women out there who break the Plenty of Fish Mould.
    5 years ago, I never thought I would be here... crazy how life works out, guess the secret works.
    Do not message me if you are:
    * A Stripper
    * a bartender
    * a waitress
    * have implants
    * an aspiring actress
    * a Scorpio
    It never works out....

    And, I will admit that a large part of this was copied from Bravo, as encouraged in his online video. I just wanted to know how my personal take on his version worked and I do understand, now, what you mean about over pushing myself. I think that I was too keen for response that I was going over the other side and generating no responses.


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