Re: I need criticism on my POF profile.
The profile is ok I guess. Me personally, I dont dig the first pic. I would add a few more that show you doing more than just hanging out with chics.
I have used a variation of what you have in your about me and gotten decent results myself but not to the level I have it now.
Now what I say isnt gold but I can kind of make suggestions from what has worked for me. A lot of ppl say to put pics up of you with others and I agree. However, in my profile for the most part I'm alone with the exception of like one pic I think. I also think mine is a tad bit out of control and ontop of that I fireaway messages and get a pretty good response rate.
If you want take a look at mine. Just take your link and chage the profile id from your to : 44366542
With this particular profile I have been able to game women of all ages like a mofo. All my messages to them are congruent with my profile which is Im very random and say a lot of funny shit so that plays into it.
Also I may fire away a message. Give it time look and see who viewed me and then I fire away another message along the lines of Dont be shy, say HI! ;-). Have been able to open many that way. If they dont respond I'll give it a few days and then fire messages that are just as random but sifferent and eventually sometimes boom i open the chic. Its not a 100% ratio but im pleased.
Anyway, congruency will make you or break you and in my opinion dont give much of a shit about sounding cool or anything. Just be funny!
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