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    MikeZee is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Let's hear your 2 cents.

    So here's my OKCupid profile. I tried to make it unique by making it funny. I've received numerous messages from girls who says it's funny. Unfortunately, I'm not attracted to these girls. The girls I do find attractive usually don't initiate a message with me. A lot of the messages I've sent out don't usually get a reply. But without further ado here is my profile:

    My self-summary
    This part of the question feels like the objective of a resume. So here it is: To meet new people and make new friends. If something more were to come from it, then beautiful. If not, we can't have too many friends.

    What I’m doing with my life
    Pursuing happiness and sharing it.

    Trying to be a better person even when things don't go accordingly.

    Always looking for the silver lining.

    When I was in high school, my teacher asked me what I wanted to be. 'Will you be a doctor? Will you be an accountant?' Here's what I said to her, 'Que sera sera, whatever will be, will be. The future is not ours to see. Que sera sera. What will be, will be."

    I’m really good at
    ...being me. I like to think we're all good at this. Well, I mean me being me and you being you.

    ...dancing in front of the mirror. I think the guy on the other side of the mirror must really be impressed by my skills. I always catch him copying my every move.

    ...this game at the coin operated car wash where you put in a dollar and you get four quarters. I win every time! I can teach you how to play.

    The first things people usually notice about me
    People tend to point out how white my teeth are. I grew them myself. *flashes pearly whites*

    Favorite books, movies, shows, music, and food
    Favourite movie? Thank you for smoking. The wittiest and funniest movie in my book.

    Favourite music? The type of music that makes you want to bust a move like Elaine on Seinfeld.

    I'll try everything at least once. Twice if I mess it up the first time.

    The six things I could never do without
    - I'd write family and friends here like everyone does, but they are not things.
    - Food, water and a volleyball named Wilson (Brownie points goes to you if you know the reference)
    - My air guitar
    - My DVD rewinder. I'm saving up for the Bluray rewinder.
    - A twisted sense of humour
    I spend a lot of time thinking about
    ...you because you're amazing just the way you are.

    On a typical Friday night I am
    getting jiggy wit' it. I'm not sure what this means but that's what everyone does on a Friday night, right?

    The most private thing I’m willing to admit
    I'm naked underneath my clothes.

    My credit card number is 1234 4567 8910 1112.

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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    DISCLAIMER: I'm new and I suck at this.

    Let's start at the beginning...the girls you want are almost never gonna msg you. Not you personally, any of us. Unless you're really good looking, sexism dictates you have to msg the ones worth your time first. Moving on...

    Self-summary seems VERY needy to me. I'd start over from scratch, write something a little more cocky funny.

    What I'm doing with my life is boring. Zzzz... Sorry, I know it's probably sincere but it's not what girls are looking for. Say something interesting! Years ago, I used to tell girls that I was on my way to becoming a pro gamer. It was true, at the time. I wasn't nerdy so it didn't work against me and it was interesting so girls were into it because I was into it. If you're adverse to lying, think about what you REALLY wanna do. The things you don't usually say to other people. Then make up a few witticisms to go with that.

    I'm really good at...really isn't bad. It's not great but you can make it work.

    The first thing people notice...not good. I would probably just skip answering that entirely. It's qualifying yourself to her, not what you wanna do.

    Favorite books, music etc...I've seen people advised never to answer those kinds of questions. But I like the "I'll try anything once". Shit like that, I think most people get from hearing movie characters say but it works too. I've been sending girls a first msg that just says "Don't be shy, I don't bite (:" and it's moderately successful. It's a lame cliche line but some of them do work and you can definitely write something like "My favorite things are the ones I'm trying for the first time. I'll try anything once, twice if I think I don't like it."

    Friday night...again, no. Just make up something totally ridiculous. Hell, put "I meet with an underground league of extraordinary pimps to discuss the previous weeks conquests." (Don't actually write that but you get the idea)

    Most private thing I'm willing to admit...Your response seems OK but for some reason I hate that question. Like, if it's private, why would I admit it online to 5 million prospective mates?

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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    Thank you urbancowboy. I appreciate your honesty. I'll keep it in mind.

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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    I sucked with online dating on my first go-round. We're talking total Atomic Bomb!!

    Fast-forward 2 months
    (after doing some research & studying) Completely revamp the profile & photos... inject a load of "INTELLECTUAL HUMOR".... upload profile... go to bed.

    Wake up next morning:
    20+ emails in my inbox.... Face-palm myself & blurt out expletive (HOLY ****!!!!).... read messages & check out the profiles..... One more face-palm & expletive...(These girls are **** Mother *** HOT!!!!)

    Send replies & go to work.

    Come home & check account:
    40+ emails in my inbox..... Pick jaw up from floor..... read emails & check profiles..... Smokin hot girls!!! (Multiple expletives stream from my mouth for several minutes).... Realize I stumbled onto to something HUGE with my profile....
    *BIG SMILE = GAME ON!!

    I've been on both sides of that fence. From sucksville to Goldmine!

    The key to getting the HOT girls to respond is to carefully put your profile together, so that it weeds out the undesirables as much as possible. (Although; you'll always have a few who manage to wiggle through).

    So what's the secret?
    "Intellectual Humor"!! (That's the first part)
    It's not just about being funny... It's not about being cocky.... It's about demonstrating intelligence & wit.

    What's the 2nd part?
    "A good hook!" Something interesting to get their attention. (which you DID have in your profile)

    The 3rd part to complete it?
    "Mystery" - to create intrigue & curiosity... the foundation of attraction.

    You don't want to give away too much info... but just enough to make them feel comfortable.

    You want to use intelligence & intellect, because the REALLY HOT GIRLS (who are worth spending time with) are the smart ones!! (They have great jobs, make more money... AND can understand humor.... especially the sarcastic kind!)

    You don't want your profile to sound like a bunch of cliche's or canned material. Most hot girls have seen the "famous great profile" and have received the "best intro email" hundreds of times. (or slightly tweaked variations of them.)

    The trick is to be original, but follow those 3 basic principles I listed. That means you're gonna have to get a little creative, & put in a little effort... especially when you message them!

    But, the payoff is SOOOO worth it!

    Use lots of descriptive words, & maintain that mysterious edge, rather than using cheesy humor.
    Descriptive writing is GOLD!! It allows the girl's imagination to kick in & begin dreaming about how awesome you might be!

    Bait the hook & cast the line.... get the bite & reel it in... measure the catch & release if necessary...... or keep it if it's up to standards.



    Need one on one private coaching? PM me for details.

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    MikeZee is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    Alright, so I got 1 out of 3 right. That's a start. I'll have to think about something intellectual.

    I'm not too sure how to add mystery.

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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    [/B]What Im doimg with my life -pick one and stick to it. All the other stuff for srsly fk-it! I know.

    In the section of "Im really good at.." consult itnthat NO!!! You gotta learn day game by trying it!
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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    Sorry for the weird reply ^ I was posting online while falling asleep - bad combination lol

    But my 2 cents:

    Looks good generally, only two things I'd say to think about, (1) in your "what I'm doing with my life" section I'd say try and phrase it or elaborate/eliminate things so that it creates more of an identity than just a list (2) in "I'm really good at" I'd suggest dropping the elipses (...) so you come off as more confident
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    Default Re: Let's hear your 2 cents.

    Quote Originally Posted by T-Mal View Post
    I sucked with online dating on my first go-round. We're talking total Atomic Bomb!!

    Fast-forward 2 months
    (after doing some research & studying) Completely revamp the profile & photos... inject a load of "INTELLECTUAL HUMOR".... upload profile... go to bed.

    Wake up next morning:
    20+ emails in my inbox.... Face-palm myself & blurt out expletive (HOLY ****!!!!).... read messages & check out the profiles..... One more face-palm & expletive...(These girls are **** Mother *** HOT!!!!)

    Send replies & go to work.

    Come home & check account:
    40+ emails in my inbox..... Pick jaw up from floor..... read emails & check profiles..... Smokin hot girls!!! (Multiple expletives stream from my mouth for several minutes).... Realize I stumbled onto to something HUGE with my profile....
    *BIG SMILE = GAME ON!!

    I've been on both sides of that fence. From sucksville to Goldmine!

    The key to getting the HOT girls to respond is to carefully put your profile together, so that it weeds out the undesirables as much as possible. (Although; you'll always have a few who manage to wiggle through).

    So what's the secret?
    "Intellectual Humor"!! (That's the first part)
    It's not just about being funny... It's not about being cocky.... It's about demonstrating intelligence & wit.

    What's the 2nd part?
    "A good hook!" Something interesting to get their attention. (which you DID have in your profile)

    The 3rd part to complete it?
    "Mystery" - to create intrigue & curiosity... the foundation of attraction.

    You don't want to give away too much info... but just enough to make them feel comfortable.

    You want to use intelligence & intellect, because the REALLY HOT GIRLS (who are worth spending time with) are the smart ones!! (They have great jobs, make more money... AND can understand humor.... especially the sarcastic kind!)

    You don't want your profile to sound like a bunch of cliche's or canned material. Most hot girls have seen the "famous great profile" and have received the "best intro email" hundreds of times. (or slightly tweaked variations of them.)

    The trick is to be original, but follow those 3 basic principles I listed. That means you're gonna have to get a little creative, & put in a little effort... especially when you message them!

    But, the payoff is SOOOO worth it!

    Use lots of descriptive words, & maintain that mysterious edge, rather than using cheesy humor.
    Descriptive writing is GOLD!! It allows the girl's imagination to kick in & begin dreaming about how awesome you might be!

    Bait the hook & cast the line.... get the bite & reel it in... measure the catch & release if necessary...... or keep it if it's up to standards.

    This is probably a stupid question but what's a good starting point, as in a book or a post someone wrote so that I can learn to write a profile like that? I sent 50+ msgs and got less than 10 replies, and most of them were negative. I tried multiple lines with different girls and had someone look over my profile and they said it was fairly solid. I don't need someone to hold my hand, just someone to tell me what to read so that I can gain the knowledge that you have.


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