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    sainttm is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Profile me up - critique for sainttm

    Hey guys,

    So Ive read some previous posts and get a feeling Im falling into the same trap as most men here with the profile / message for online dating.

    I'm looking to get out of my safety bubble and hang out with a local wingman but fiances are extremely tight at the moment which is preventing me from going out. Winning the lotto doesnt seem to be turning out for me so anyone interest in a bank robbery or two, let me know..oh and sperm banks dont make for a good raid, it gets messy. So thats why Im looking to improve my game but start out online, then work up to in person.

    Anyways, to the reason Im here, I need some harsh but fair comments on my POF profile and need to up my game...OK you got me, start the game as to date I didnt even know of the world of PUA.

    My ID is: 42917286

    Comments on profiles, photos anything and everything is fair game, be mean but fair. If theres something good, let me know Im here to learn guys and want to pick you guys dry for feedback. As Styles says, I want you guys to download what you know into me.

    Oh Ive just got 'the game' and part way through.

    I appreciate a lot of fellas prefer to go out for real and think chumps stick to the internet but most of my relationships have been from the internet dating sites...but then they are ex's for a reason I guess :S So lets work on the profile and take it from there, building ever upwards to going out sarging (god I hope this makes sense and Im not missing up terms lol)

    Look forward to hearing from you guys.

    Saint

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    sainttm is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Profile me up

    I'm not sure if people are having issues getting to the profile, the link is blocked but if you enter the id number at the end of the URL you should be able to see it.

    profile_id=42917286

    Ive also pasted the profile text below but the photos are on the site.

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    About Me:
    Hi there and thanks for taking the time to check out my profile.

    Lets begin, I'm 32 living in Lincoln and work as a telephony technician, whats that you say. Well its an exciting challenging job involving call centre systems based in Lincoln and supporting the phone systems across the group around the UK. I'm currently certified as a voice specialist and continuing to challenge and push myself to improve my career and knowledge.

    I enjoy going for walks with my dog, I also enjoy Wing Chun (martial arts), I'm thinking of cycling to work which will help improve my fitness, as its an 8 mile trek and one killer long hill to contend with on the way back which will be a good fitness workout and helps out the environment win win lol.

    What else, ah yes I also like photography, Ive done a number of classes and found I really enjoy taking portrait photos and invested in some new kit for taking photos. I also enjoy drawing, Ive done a number of drawing classes and found life art to be an amazing experience and if you re interested in drawing I would recommend it as it helps teach you to draw people. I’ve just recently turned my thumb green by trying to grow some veggies although there’s more weeds ..isn't that just the way of things . I also enjoy lazy nights in, going out to meet up with mates or visiting the family.

    There is a lot of I's and Im's here lol, I think thats enough about me, lets find out about you know. So send me a message and tell me about you.
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    First Date:
    Somewhere quiet to chat and relax, somewhere we both decide on.
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    Hope this helps.

    Saint

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    sainttm is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Profile me up

    Any help? Ive noticed a number of views but no advice so far.

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    sainttm is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Profile me up

    Replies seem to be a bit thin. How about a different tack, what if I list some interests and see if we could come up with something. Would that help get some responses and help me out?

    Well here goes nothing:

    Interests: Photography, wing chun, walking dog, watching TV ...oh god whom I kidding, this isnt going to work lol.

    How about anyone pointing me to a good posting for a profile and I just copy it, maybe change a bit?

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    Default Re: Profile me up - critique for sainttm

    The key is to NOT divulge a lot of specific info about yourself. If you give away all the info, a girl has nothing to look forward to discovering later on.



    You want to evoke feelings & emotions, as well as curiosity & intrigue with your profile.

    Use lots of descriptive words to give clues about your personality & your interests... but don't tell your life story / summary.

    The BEST profiles give just a couple tidbits, but leave them wanting more!
    (Think "Movie trailer".... a couple highlights to hook you & get your attention, & then a few splashes of interesting things to make you want to "buy the ticket")



    Need one on one private coaching? PM me for details.

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    Default Re: Profile me up - critique for sainttm

    Quote Originally Posted by T-Mal View Post
    The key is to NOT divulge a lot of specific info about yourself. If you give away all the info, a girl has nothing to look forward to discovering later on.



    You want to evoke feelings & emotions, as well as curiosity & intrigue with your profile.

    Use lots of descriptive words to give clues about your personality & your interests... but don't tell your life story / summary.

    The BEST profiles give just a couple tidbits, but leave them wanting more!
    (Think "Movie trailer".... a couple highlights to hook you & get your attention, & then a few splashes of interesting things to make you want to "buy the ticket")

    I don't suppose you could give me an example, as it sounds simple but I cant think what to put.


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