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  1. #1
    Vegas is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Exclamation Can Use A POF Profile Critique

    Here it is gentlemen, lemme know what you think,.


    Okay, here's what I'm into...

    Partners in crime. Being that couple that makes others stare jealously and wish they were on our level lol
    Mutual respect. No mind games, no bs. Not being too controlling or possessive. Lets just enjoy each others company.
    Oh and don't lie either

    I like people that actually have things going on. Unique people who have an interesting life for others to be a part of.
    People who have standards in life and have faith in their own potential.
    Oh and be open minded too. I'll go ahead and mention that I work in the exotic dancer business outside of music.
    It's incredibly surreal to imagine what percentage of men in the world actually know how it feels to be that guy, in that moment.

    In the dancer business I've matured to the point of learning that beauty is very common. You're either born with it or you pay for it.
    What's rare is a good energy, a good outlook. Standing out in a crowd rather than letting others dictate who you are.
    Having a mind of your own instead of believing what everyone else says to believe. That's rare, too.

    I like rare people.
    Maybe that's why I'm here. Or maybe I'm just curious, who knows lol.

    One more thing... It is absolutely mandatory that you have a good taste in music. Doesn't have to be what I'm into but please don't crank up Patsy Cline while were driving. Spice Girls maybe, but only if we're drunk and wanna sing lol

    Anything else u wanna know just hit me up

    -ADAM-


    The other things I'm wondering are...

    1. Wording / Presentation
    2. Is 3 pics with chicks too much? Also are good looking shirtless pics try hard?
    3. Not funny or challenging enough?
    4. Should I mention the fact that I'm a male Stripper right off the bat?
    5. Also, is it try hard to mention both stripping and music career?

    Very new to online game, but its worth a shot
    Any and all (good) feedback is greatly appreciated!

    -VEGAS-
    -RESISTANCE IS FUTILE-

  2. #2
    keeksy1984 is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Re: Can Use A POF Profile Critique

    Hey Vegas

    Partners in crime. Being that couple that makes others stare jealously and wish they were on our level lol
    Mutual respect. No mind games, no bs. Not being too controlling or possessive. Lets just enjoy each others company.
    Oh and don't lie either

    This is a very negative way to start your profile, Most women will only read first few lines of your profile and it has to hook them

    I like people that actually have things going on. Unique people who have an interesting life for others to be a part of.
    People who have standards in life and have faith in their own potential.


    You are showing preselection and you have standards here but you are telling far too muh about yourself and not leaving any mystery

    In the dancer business I've matured to the point of learning that beauty is very common. You're either born with it or you pay for it.
    What's rare is a good energy, a good outlook. Standing out in a crowd rather than letting others dictate who you are.
    Having a mind of your own instead of believing what everyone else says to believe. That's rare, too


    This is good, again showing preselection, standards and challenging HBs to prove they are worth your time, I would streamline and reword this however

    All in all you have some good details but your profile is lacking any humour and gives away all your mystery on your profile

    Three pics are fine, make sure you have one good head/ body shot & two activity photographs. Personally i would ditch the shirtless pics as it looks very try hard, Like you say though you are a Stripper and id be very surprised if they don't demand a pic later, then you can reward for good behaviour

    Have a good look through "Online dating thread" there are lots of info on good profiles and pay extra attention to any PUA all stars posts.

    I'm on my phone so i can't link anything to posts or my profile sorry, I basically looked through alot of threads and meshed lots of ideas together and made it specific to myself, I've had more success than ever since. I would advise the same strategy for yourself.

    GOOD LUCK


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