Re: Peer review needed. Also, is she interested?
Not bad actually. at first played it pretty casual and just talked. That kind of worries me cause the first contact is usually the most important part. If you dont seperate yourself from the other guys you wont be fun or unique and just become "one of the 5 guys". you needed to first start out fun and build attraction before going a little more casual but it worked out. she is interested.
I actually dont know why your so worried. the biggest thing now would to invite her out again specfically to chill with you and everybody else in your crew so you get the whole night to game her and get her attraction level up. then that would be the best moment for your pre club/party work. its good to setup the house for if you do bring her or the party home. the best way to take the pressure off of inviting her home would be to have an after party at your house. then it allows her to say yes more easily and it would be easier to fuck close her then. if you have any logistical problems that keep that from happening figure them out. logistical problems are usually what keep a guy from getting the girl home and into there bed.
as far as text game. good work and keep up the fun, playful and different text so that your the man and she just has 4 other guys chasing her.
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