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Thread: Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

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    Johnny_Toledo is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

    I realize the title sounded pretty gay haha, but moving on. My OkCupid profile name is "JohnnyToledo." Please just look over everything: (about me, pics, and likes) and tell me what you think. I realize the entire profile comes off as not giving a complete shit at all, which is kind of what I'm going for; I just do not want to sound like a complete douche lol. I've been getting a lot of responses, but have been having trouble going all the way to a meet..

    Let me know what your OkCupid is, and I'll critique yours as well. Thanks!

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    Default Re: Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

    Copy & Paste your profile here and we'll take alook!!

    I'm not on OKC but if your getting alot of responses then it seems like your opener and profile are good, So work on keeping convos light & fun then escalate to a D2

    I personally keep it to 6/7 messages back and forth then escalate with "Out of 10 game" (you'll find a link here somewhere)

    Online is a complete numbers game!!!

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    Default Re: Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

    Personally, I had the most success when I avoided using profiles that might make me look like a total d!ck.
    Instead; I went for a fun, entertaining, humorous vibe to make girls laugh(or at least smile).

    BTW- Cocky/funny works better in person than it does in a written profile or in a message.
    Just go for being genuine in your humor. It will definitely translate much better.


    Need one on one private coaching? PM me for details.

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    Default Re: Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

    Profile looks pretty solid. I would put the skydiving picture as one of the first three though so it pops up when a girl hovers over your picture before clicking it. Right now the three that show up are all you in various suit poses, might help to mix up the impression before the click.

    You do a few things that are pretty high risk (like the "big penis" joke in what people notice about you first). That's probably good for screening purposes if it's high reward also. I've read though that it's usually a bad idea to have explicitly sexual things in your profile, but who knows, it's worth experimenting with.

    All in all seems pretty solid to me, but I just started this so take it with a grain of salt. Check out mine, LibertyRisk and tell me what you think.

    My biggest concern is that I've recently started shaving my head (i was loosing my hair anyway and took the PUA advice of just owning it). I haven't noticed much of a difference to how girls react to me in person, but I wonder if online where they don't get to see other aspects of your persona (body language, attitude, etc.) it will be a handicap. Seems to be working ok, but I obviously don't get feedback from the girls that are auto-screening me out because of it.

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    Default Re: Ill critique yours if you critique mine...

    Thank for the input so far guys. Yeah, I realize that my profile is a little crazy, but thats genuinely who I am. Ill experiment and see how it goes.

    LibRisk, I havent been able to read your message or look at your profile yet because OkCupid is temporarily down at the moment- it wont let me log in. But I will for sure take a look when I get the chance. I think you made a smart decision shaving your head- it worked for Neill Strauss- very well I might add. Look at some of todays action star sex symbols- Bruce Willis, Vin Diesel, Jason Stathom, etc.. Something tells me these men have no problem getting women. I think you should keep up the shaving of your head, but make sure to keep some cool facial hair- I think it will give it the illusion that it was your choice to shave your head, and not balding....Also LibRisk, can you give me a link to the "framing" technique you use with online game


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