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Thread: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

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    Default Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    This is the first convo we had a day or so after we met. She seemed really interested, hugging, kisses on the cheek enought though we barely talked. I'm kinda new to pretty much everything so I was a somewhat shocked and quite a bit drunk but I got her number before she left. (She commented that she doesn't usually give out her number.)

    Me: Hi there

    Her: Hi who's this?

    Me: We met in *club*, you 'played pool' with me and my bud.
    Her: 'Played pool' what's that supposed to mean? :L cheeky. Uhm not really doing anything, just watching the last episode of season 2 of skins tonight :'') what about you?

    Me: You took shots for both of us so I dunno if you helped or not... lol I'm watching some documentary, and texting you. Skins any good? I missed the first few series but I heard the later seasons were not as good.

    Her: Hehe some documentary :') you boring boy well I was forced into watching the first series by my flat mates cuz I'd never seen it before but it's quite good minus the bad acting :L

    Me: Haha, you have some sense of taste, then! What else do ya watch? I'm guessing you Downton Abbey.

    Her: Ey? What makes you think that :') I don't really like soaps tbh. The only thing I like is a programme called Smash but it's finished now til Feb I take it you watch all of the rubbish though?

    Me: Downton Abbey is like the pinnacle of acting, obvs... I don't watch much TV tbh, c4 drama, mad men, Big Bang theory is about it. Movies are my thing. How can you afford sky anyway?

    Her: Yaaaay movies same! Oh I had it at home and when the new series comes on I'm going watch it over the Internet or get my mum to record the series for me :')

    Me: Cool, we're having a movie night. ) What did you see last that you like last then? (Full review missy!)

    Her: The possession :') cuz it was funny scary and I love funny scary films cuz they're my favourite. I also liiiikkkeedd... The one that came out not so long ago where they messed around with time - loved that one XD what about you? PLEEAASSEE don't say twilight x

    Me: Heh, niiice, the one with an emo Bruce willis trying to kill himself or summit? What I would do if I had the budget of the possession.. Bloody jews :/. Last one I saw was Argo, dead tense. Twilight is fucking awesome btw, what you on about.

    Her: *No reply for over an hour*

    Me: I gtg, talk to you later! \o

    I think I was too wordy especially with the last text, and could be more humours? She was taking longer to respond each time.
    Thanks in advance.

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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    the start was good, the convo was decent, she invested, the part where you incorporated Jews into the text maybe was a bit too early, try and stay off the racial slurs and sh1t in the beginning

    Twilight is farking awesome btw, what you on about.
    to put it in simple terms, you are wrong

    Me: I gtg, talk to you later! \o
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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    "Twilight is awesome!"

    Slap yourself in the face right now! check to see if you have testicles... did you find a big fleshy patch where they used to be?

    Sorry to be harsh but i fucking hate twilight, the only valid reason to watch it is to get laid.

    You need to control the conversation a little more and start to push and pull. Bust her on some of her opinions... throw in a oh "so you're one of those girls" comment and make her qualify herself.

    Twilight really?!! are you certain you don't like men?

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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    The twilight thing was meant to be sarcasm, I wonder now if she got it either.

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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    I would have gone with e.g. Twilight is frankly the greatest thing that has ever come to big screen. It changed my life, It was magical it was.... really really shit!

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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    riffing on the above, you can tell her the credits were the highlight of the movie everything else was mediocre / average

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    Default Re: Crit needed on first text game! HB8

    Tell her you'd rather watch the residual popcorn on the ground. Lololol. Don't use that advice.


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