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    BdeAMOR is offline Aspiring PUA
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    After reading a billion profiles, I've found that every women likes at least one of the following qualities/acitivities: Family, Beach, Country music. I have come up with a story for each that I like to write in my opening message. Please feel free to give me some advice and critiques!:

    Family:
    Since family is so important to you, maybe you can help me settle a debate I'm having with my dad. I have 5 little sisters, ages 3-23, that I absolutely love to spoil. They are my world. I practically tear up every time I walk in the door and they come running up to me, screaming my name(**Ability to emote?**). My dad thinks that they will be become spoiled brats if I keep getting them gifts all the time. What do you think? Do you have sibling you like to spoil? (**I'm thinking of changing this to a story that is more along the lines of the "protector of loved ones" strategy**)

    Country Music:
    I'm also a big fan of country music. This last year, I was on a date(**preselection? ?**) at a Rascal Flatts concert, and just as the band started to play a slow, romantic song a fight broke out. Can you believe that?! People turning violent at the sound of a love song!

    Beach:
    I enjoy going to the beach, but recently had a bad experience. I was enjoying myself, getting my tan on, and the girl I was with(**Preseletion?? **) thought it would be fun to go in the water. Naturally, being the macho man that I am, I went out a little too far. Long story short, the Newport Beach lifeguards get pretty angry when they have to save a grown man!

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    Default Re: Stories for first message

    Is the family story true? Do you really have five sisters? The whole story did not seem genuine to me and most women, if not all will pick up on that. I would go with something that genuine happened, or close to it. Something like, I love my family, but it sucks being the oldest sometimes. You know how many bullies I had to fight with when I grew up? Each one of my siblings went through a bully phase, and naturally I had to step up. but i love them

    i like the second story... pretty good. You can something like, I felt like i was in the twillight zone.. I hear the words, I love you so much baaaaaby! and then two people down, these guys are killing each other roaring!

    I don't like the beach story at all. Shows weakness, even though you are laughing at yourself. I would go with, I love going to the beaches. I always make sure to pack a picnic basket. Last time I went with my ex, there was this really old guy with a metal detector going crazy with it. I think he was blind. Anyway, his machine started beeping like crazy near my ex's butt and the old man was getting excited. Turned out there was a quarter near her leg that came out of her bag. It was so funny.
    The world is your matrix. You control the strings.

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    BdeAMOR is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Stories for first message

    Awesome advice! The family story is actually 100% true, but like you said... It doesn't matter if it doesn't seem believable.

    Your beach story is perfect. I will have to make my own variation.

    Good stuff!


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