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    Stigward is offline PUA in Training
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    Default OKCupid profile help please?

    Hey, Guys.

    I read some of the stuff on online game, And when I went to write an okcupid profile, I realised that I just didn't get it. SO I'm looking for some honest critical advice on where I've gone wrong in my profile and how to make it a better advert to sell myself please? My profile is under name "Broad_Horizon".

    Absolutely any help or advice or sugested rewrites would be massively appreciated.

    Note: I'm not overly serious about online game, I just thought it would be good to keep active while I'm not out sarging.

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    Stigward is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Re: OKCupid profile help please?

    Ok, I decided to put the train wreck of a profile on here. I'm rubbish at this kind of stuff, So any help really would be appreciated.

    Here it is.......

    *My self-summary*

    Some people see my nerdy side and think that's me, Some people see my adrenaline side and think that's me. Well, I'm neither and I'm both, and that's what makes me exciting. I've got the balls to do crazy things, And I've got the brains to do it well.
    I can be a bit of an adventure fiend, And there are lots out there to be had. Some of my adventures include starting businesses, All manner of experiments causing all manner of madness and Crazy weekend trips to the middle of nowhere to do who-knows-what!?
    The way I see it is like this; I'm stuck with this life, why not make the most of it? So, that's what I do, squeezing every ounce of excitement out of every moment.
    I meet a lot of new people without the help of the internet, But I thought I'd give this sort of thing a go just to see what happens, Who knows where the next adventure will come from.

    *What Iím doing with my life*

    Living it day by day whilst maintaining my long term plan to get success and riches from business and entertainment. And between the segments spent grafting towards the good life, I play my guitars, Build crazy machines, party and look for something new to try. Any suggestions on new things to try? Go ahead, pitch it, As long as you're prepared to try it with me!
    SO what is this long term plan I speak of? My aim, And I shall do it one day, Is to create a venue that fuses the best of theatrical effects and night club environments. SO, there will be bars and a lounge and a main room with a gigantic dancefloor upon which the likes of skrillex, Pendulum, Metallica and such will play (I can dream) but the crowd will be surrounded by fire and lightening, The roof will be a smoke projection screen showing anything from thunderstorms aided by Tesla coils, To a journey through the stars, Or even the tardis's journey.... SOunds nerdy I know, But when you're in that room with the music and effects, It's gonna be way to cool to be nerdy. You'll see!

    *Iím really good at*

    - Optomism (I hope)
    - Partying
    - Making fun from dull moments
    - Lists
    - umm....
    - Playing guitars
    - Entertaining
    - Listening/ caring and helping my friends get up when they're down

    *The first things people usually notice about me*

    That I don't have a Bristolian accent.

    *Favorite books, movies, shows, music, and food*

    Books - The Living tree saga (Ok, So this might be a little vein seeing as this is the fantasy sag I'm writing, But it really is the best. You'll see.)
    Movies - wow, so many. I have over 700 films now, So if you ever wanna kick back and watch a movie, get in touch, I might have one you'll like. Probably.
    Music - So, my music tastes are so broad it's gonna be difficult to get that across. I'll list some of what I listen to;
    Ludovico Einaudi, Camille Saint saens, Limp Bizkit, Infected Mushroom, Pink floyd, Rob Dougan, Skrillex, Foreign Beggarz, CLutch, Tesseract, VIldjahrta, Muse, Faithless, Mord Fustang, Knife party.... Each time I think of another one it makes me want to listen to it, So to save my sanity for now, I shall continue this later.
    Food! Edible good food. And lots of it. I love to cook, I see it like this - We have to eat, so why not take the time in learning to make the best food? So I have a few recipes that I love to make and am always looking for new ideas. And I lvoe cooking for people, Too. I used to have this phobia of preparing food for people, So I got over it by cooking for everybody.

    *The six things I could never do without*

    - People
    - Parties
    - Music and my guitars
    - Sense of humor
    - Adventures
    - A smile
    - My ability to count... wait..

    *I spend a lot of time thinking about*

    What to do next. What I did last, And what I'm doing at the time. Don't forget the past, Don't ignore the future, But live in the moment.
    The next song I shall write, Physics and the Tesla coils I'm building and who will be the next amazing person I will meet. I meet a lot of them, You think you fit the quota?
    On a typical Friday night I am
    Partying or having some sort of fun, Or waiting for work to finish so the fun can begin.

    *The most private thing Iím willing to admit*

    Why don't I tell you that over a drink?

    *You should message me if*

    If you recognize me from a night out in town. This is quite likely as I've sampled most of the sides of Bristol's night life. If you want to prove me wrong, Message me.
    You're ready to do something a little different, Have some fun, Or are feeling adventurous. To be honest, I'm always chatting to new people anyway so just go ahead and be a new person.
    Or if you feel like you're only on here to answer test questions and do quizzes, Prove that there is another reason than that and message someone... Quickly now, you don't have long...


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