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    mysterioustoker is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default quick convo critique

    we got drunk at a couple parties together. lots of hand holding and she was touching her forehead to mine a lot and whispering in my ear. she did however sit on someone else's lap for a bit. me and her were beer pong partners at both parties and went undefeated both times so that's kind of our thing.

    anyway

    what could i have said better/what did i do badly?

    me: guess what didn't happen?

    her: YOU DIDN'T WIN BEER PONG?!

    me: clearly i need my partner for victory...and an opponent that isn't sober lol. any fun had besides your drive back home this weekend?

    her: hahaha, who was your partner for beer pong?! and not to much i' sick right now. puked all day yesterday :/ and only ate a piece of toast today. hopefully tomorrow i'm feeling better!

    me: oh lol that's just a delightful image. that sucks you're sick though :/. you gotta get some cuddles from someone. cuddles fix everything . how early do you have class tomorrow?

    her: i know right!! i made my friends come hang out with me yesterday so i wasn't forever alone and gross

    me: so are you chillin at the toilet rim watching sex and the city on your phone or just being forever alone and gross in bed?

    her: hahaha, none of the above. i have wonderful friends. i was just laying one the couch watching youtube but my friends just showed up and demanded i come hang out with them. so now im over at brittneys. havnt puked today so im doing better!

    me: well youre lucky to have them! ill quit bugging you but let me know some dates in feb that you have free (were visiting a friend in ND together). Have fun and hopefully youre feeling better in the morbung!

    me: -_- morning*

    her: lol alright i will send you some dates when i know

    not sure if the friends coming to get her was true or if she was looking for an excuse to stop texting. Also i thought i would try to make a false assumption by saying ill stop bugging her. is that a bad thing to say?
    please point out anything i did wrong, let me know if i did something well or liked something i said.
    feedback is always appreciated

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    Default Re: quick convo critique

    Analyzing it too much. No idt her saying shes at her friend's house is an excuse. And don't say im gonna stop buging you, sounds AFC. An Alpha doesn't bug people so don't say it you're just painting that image in her head. besides that pretty good.
    In life you get what you put into it.

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    mysterioustoker is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: quick convo critique

    i guess im always looking for clever ways of transitioning to a sexual subject. anything i could have said better? also, would you say its a good idea to wait until at least next weekend to text her if she doesnt text me sooner?

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    Default Re: quick convo critique

    I pretty much adopted the rule you only text to set up a meeting. It eliminates the chance of you becoming friendzoned through texting. Plus face-to-face is 100x better where both you and her can read expressions and responses are genuine not thought out. Sometime I think I could be better at it but in the words of asher roth "No text's gonna give me head"
    In life you get what you put into it.

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    Default Re: quick convo critique

    she was back for winter break. shes back at school now. Yea i agree face to face is always the way to go. just trying to get my text game up for times like this when someone is not geographically available at the moment. back to the question though, should i wait until next weekend to text her or is just a few day ok?


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