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  1. #1
    randomhero411 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default I need to vent please add to this

    So here I go sounding AFC maybe but unno... I have started really getting into this lifestyle.. I have to learn so much out in the field right now I am stuck at work behind a desk most nights so I have been scouting POF and OKCUPID.. I have opened the last few days with a worked opener that i have found on here. I just logged in... i had gotten 8 F'ing views a span of a hour.. YES VIEWS YAY!!! but not one fing message tell me what are these girls seeing what are they not liking I am going to just copy and past the dum thing here but now it is saying i can't clarkson95 on okcupid I have posted it before

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    Sense is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: I need to vent please add to this

    Change the photo, that angle wouldn't be flattering no matter who is in the picture. Get a nice photo, straight on from head level. And SMILE! If you're not comfortable with your smile, keep taking photos until you get one you like, or work on your smile in the mirror (I literally do this, because I don't like mine).

    Also, I strongly encourage you to use proper grammar on your profile. Words like "kinda" and not using punctuation can really kill a profile. A well-written profile speaks volumes about a person, especially to a girl trying to meet someone. Edits I'd hit first are switching "kinda" with "kind of" and using commas for ALL lists. Bands, movies, all of them. You have some great material written in some of those questions, so don't necessarily change the content, just clean the writing up a bit. Don't use abbreviated versions of words: use "although" instead of "tho." There also seems to be an extra word in "walking in around alone in public."

    Clean up your grammar and you'll be well on your way! I'm sure you'll get some other tips here too, but this is a crucial one.


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