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    Default Critique my texts plz

    We talked for like 4 mins and I number closed. then I think she saw me hook up with another girl in the club because she ignored my 2 txts and 1 vmail the following week.

    My two texts were "Hey, so now you have my number, XX" (I accidentally sent it to her the night I met her AND the morning after.)

    The voicemail was "Hey this is xx good to meet you, like to take you out to lunch this weekend..."

    Deleted her number and completely wrote her off as a loss which is a shame because she had amazing blue eyes.

    Two weeks later..

    HB: Hey! Sorry this is so late. it's XX... How are you?
    Me: Hey.. I'm doin good. Just at the gym. How are you?
    HB: Nice, I wish I went to the gym. I'm good. About to drink some wine and watch the Bachelor lol
    Me: Sounds nice. What types of wine do you like?
    HB: White and blush
    HB: Riesling, white zin..
    ME: Ok good I like whites too bachelor is reality tv?
    [Tried to make wine sound like a qualifier... not an open ended ?, I at least know this is bad]
    HB: Yes
    ME: Whats it about?
    HB: One guy and 16 girls that he chooses to go dates with and sh1t. Basically he is there to find love lol
    ME: How does one get on this show? sounds awesome to me lol
    HB: I mean, idk hahah
    ME: Oh um I was asking for my friend haha.... ;-)
    HB: Lmao, oh ok
    ME: Hey its good to hear from you! But I gtg 2 sleep. Gnight XX
    HB:Nighht

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    I felt like I was asking too many questions and used to many smiles. What do you guys think?

    Give me some example responses to what she was saying if you'd like to.

    Any tips are appreciated, I tried to use some of her hook points, and this is my natural sense of humor that she did seem like when I met her.
    .-* WWWEEE *-.

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    Default Re: Critique my texts plz

    Smileys don't really matter, and you did ask a bit too many questions, you could of added something like. ''You're going to drink all alone, really.. I'll help you if you want :3''

    A funny response right after you got that text could of been better then a simple Hey, example: ''I'm mad at you for taking so long haha, I'll get over it, I'm good I'm at the gym-..''

    Here's a great tip, when ever someone is telling you something, take pieces of it and keep the conversation flowing.

    When she said ''I wish I went to the gym'' You could of took that simple piece and tell her how great it is and probably what you do over there, then follow with wine and adding something funny.

    I'll be honest that text was really dull, I usted to be like that aswell

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    Default Re: Critique my texts plz

    Yea, this is basically what I call a "friend" text. She can make this same convo banter with any of her friends or neighbor. What it boils down to is this:

    "Hi. How are you doing? What is that? Okay bye."

    There's nothing here that would spark an emotional response out of her. Generic questions don't do anything. Her mom can ask her these questions.

    But not you as a prospective lover. Hence you need to add in the tease/humor.

    HB: Hey! Sorry this is so late. it's XX... How are you?
    You: Ohhh, just sitting in my penthouse, listening to Mozart, sipping aged Scotch, wishing you were here....to clean my house and cook my dinner.

    (A mix between future fantasy projection and a playful reprimand for being late.)

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    HB: White and blush
    HB: Riesling, white zin..
    You: I like whites too. Oh my...I can tell we'll never get along. We're too much alike.

    (If you want to make it into a qualifier)

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    Default Re: Critique my texts plz

    Damn you guys are good I need to hang out in this forum section more often.
    .-* WWWEEE *-.


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