Re: this online number close is GOLD!!!!!!!!!!
Agreed. To attack someone like that without any evidence of him doing so is very uncourteous and not very appropriate for the forums. If there was evidence though, I would agree in giving credit where credit is due.
Originally Posted by admin
With that said, I do think this is very interesting in terms of a Number Close. With the idea of constructive criticism in mind, the explanation of the process can be improved upon. The alternation between example and explanation is very poor, and makes it very hard to figure out how to go with my own originality and material. For instance, the Second Message phase is only examples, and two of them don't even feel like they flow with the first message.
Overall, just poor explanation that, if tidied up, I believe could yield some very unique and powerful stuff.
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