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    Default Text game critique, where can I do better

    Hi, short outline of my interaction with a HB7, crique on where I can do better would be awesome.

    HB7 is a desk clerk at a building that I pass through once a week. I direct approached her about 2 weeks ago and we chatted for about 10 minutes, I thought the first approach/interaction went really well. At one point, she shouted at one of her friend passing by: "I made a new friend!"

    this week (tuesday), I just walked up to her again and started chatting, saying how this is going to be a habit. I then played the 5 lies game with her, and joked around a little more. I think we definitely hit it off. I said we need to hang out, gave her my phone to let her give me her number, and she entered "HB, Desk Clerk".

    Texted her right afterwards:
    ME "theory8 the game extraodinaire: 1, hb the desk clerk: 0, GG!"
    HER "you may have won the battle, but I will win the war!"

    now to today, two days later, I text her

    ME "thanks for the vday card, secret admirer "
    HER "well then thanks for the flowers and the new car! I was so surprised!"
    didn't reply, went to class etc.

    few hours later

    ME: "you better get that sucker's tank filled up. Saturday, we are going to war. No prisoners. Bring your A game"
    HER: "Saturday?!?"
    ME: "its the 6th day of the week. Unless you count Sunday as the first"
    HER: "Sunday is the start of the week!"
    ME: "Stop blurting out nonsense, we are not playing the question game yet. Saturday. Meet me at the union starbucks. we are going to my secret arsenal for a real war."

    I'm going to leave out the results as far as whether she said yes or no, I just want some unbiased opinion because I felt like the entire interaction with this one has been good. Early direct approach, flirt, I came off fun and confident. texts were fun and non-needy. she seemed into it. where can I improve? what did I do well? most of our convo was been bantering, should I have built up more comfort/rapport via text?

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    Default Re: Text game critique

    seems fine to me, not boring and straight to the point, I'm tipping she said no?

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    Default Re: Text game critique

    I'd say it's looking great . Very cf and you didn't "ask" her to meet you, wich is exactly how it SHOULD be done. Keep it up!

    If she did say no i'd have guessed it's because she really had other plans or she's a real flakie.

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    Default Re: Text game critique

    Let me guess, she said she was busy? lol just kidding.

    Looks good. You are doing the right thing. Keep the texts short and to the point. Arrange a meeting with her and build attraction in person. If you have too many texts it will decrease your chances.

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    Default Re: Text game critique

    Very fun and entertaining interaction between the two of you. Never loses its spark and you played the time right with her.

    Judging by the fact it is a public coffee shop and a nice get together, I would have to say that she did accept, and right now you are searching for validation in your methods. If that is the case, then you are going wrong. Don't be indecisive, and maintain confidence in your decisions. Women and men will look up to you and follow you a lot more that way.

    Other than that, however, great job.
    "There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X


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