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  1. #1
    izayah92 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Profile critic please!

    SOME THINK I LOOK LIKE FRANK OCEAN? Your opinion please. Anyways, I like to cause trouble. Not the serious kind of trouble so much; having fun trouble.
    I'm smart, athletic, and ambitious. I strongly believe in and respect personal freedom.
    I'm very close with my family and value that aspect of my life very seriously.
    The most private thing Iím willing to say is I am in love with 1980's Mia Sarah (Ferris Buellers girlfriend).
    Message me if you have something interesting to say, or your a cool chick.

    Here is my POF profile. Please make some comments on how I can improve it! I'm getting quite a few numbers with it but now it seems like a lot of girls are blowing it off and sending no replies back to my first message. Hope you guys can help a brother out.

  2. #2
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    EMSaenz is offline PUA With Mad Respect
    Points: 2,074, Level: 28
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    Default Re: Profile critic please!

    I keep getting the same results - lots of views/few replies.

    When the views die down, I change my profile picture and my profile. I am averaging about 2 new dates per week.
    Carpe diem!

  3. #3
    JALeffel is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Profile critic please!

    Mia Sara spells her name "S-A-R-A" and she is super hot in "Timecop"

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    dvjackson is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Profile critic please!

    The "Not the serious kind of trouble so much; having fun trouble" seems kind of unnecessary.
    And maybe put "if you're a fellow troublemaker" instead of "if you're a cool chick", it's a little more playful.


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