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    Determination93 is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Great story/Feedback needed

    Hey guys, just looking for a little feedback on this conversation. I met this girl last weekend, Thursday at a house party. After sweeping this girl off her feet, she told me she wanted me. Got to my house after a long walk and I couldn't push through the LMR (needs work). So 10 days later I decide to text her. The conversation follows:

    D:Hope you haven't been gettting creeped on to hard these days by techies
    (techies=weird engineering kids; I was bridging from our initial meeting as I was making fun of AFCs trying hard)
    HB7:Oh you know, I can handle myself. It's all fun and games
    D:Haha but isn't it fun and games that occasionally leads to something more?
    HB7:Only sometimes... miss me or something?
    D:Sometimes is better than never. And oh so terrible... come over?
    HB7:Lol not tonight, maybe another night. Next weekend or something
    D:Miss me or something?
    HB7: No.. maybe a tiny bit
    D:Maybe later this week we'll find out
    HB7:We'll see.

    Any feedback is good feedback. My game has holes in it and I need some help finding them. Appreciate guys, Detemination



    "God will not place a burden on a man's shoulders knowing that he cannot carry it." - Ali

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    dvjackson is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Great story/Feedback needed

    Your "miss me or something?" seemed a little forced, she hadn't really said anything that could indicate she missed you... maybe something like "you don't sound like you miss me very much " would have been better.


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