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    Jew_jew is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Rate my online profile, please

    could u guys help me out a bit and give me some hints maybe help me to change my profile a bit..

    thank you

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    Jew_jew is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    About Me DISCLAIMER. This profile comes with money back guarantee, if you are not satisfied with in 30 days of reading this you can return to boring times and mediocre guys free of charge

    Ok lets start
    I'd like first to apologize for the typos I might have.. I must confess I'm Russian (I know no one is perfect) ;-)

    I'm smart, athletic, and ambitious. I strongly believe in and respect personal freedom.
    I'm very close with my family and value that aspect of my life very seriously.
    Before you ask yes, I am a real prince! It know where I want to be in 10 years time, but first I want to go on some adventures and someone's going to have to come with me to make sure my parents know if I die bungee jumping or in a drunken bar fight with a gang of Tibetan monks!

    I like music & films. Everyone does, don't they?

    I don't have a type, but you have to be funny and laugh at my jokes though. That is a deal breaker!








    so let me know what you guys think

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    sidewinder89 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    Ok remove the apology: never apologise!

    I'd also say get rid of statements like I'm smart athletic and ambitious...

    These are generic, don't say you're something show it!

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    Jew_jew is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    Quote Originally Posted by sidewinder89 View Post
    Ok remove the apology: never apologise!

    I'd also say get rid of statements like I'm smart athletic and ambitious...

    These are generic, don't say you're something show it!

    ok thanks, i will re edit my profile

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    Jew_jew is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    guys anything else i shoudl eddit? any help would be great

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    urbancowboy is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    Quote Originally Posted by Jew_jew View Post
    About Me DISCLAIMER. This profile comes with money back guarantee, if you are not satisfied with in 30 days of reading this you can return to boring times and mediocre guys free of charge

    Ok lets start
    I'd like first to apologize for the typos I might have.. I must confess I'm Russian (I know no one is perfect) ;-)

    I'm smart, athletic, and ambitious. I strongly believe in and respect personal freedom.
    I'm very close with my family and value that aspect of my life very seriously.
    Before you ask yes, I am a real prince! It know where I want to be in 10 years time, but first I want to go on some adventures and someone's going to have to come with me to make sure my parents know if I die bungee jumping or in a drunken bar fight with a gang of Tibetan monks!

    I like music & films. Everyone does, don't they?

    I don't have a type, but you have to be funny and laugh at my jokes though. That is a deal breaker!








    so let me know what you guys think
    I'm gonna help you but you need to stay with me here and I promise my suggestions will work...have you ever ordered steak at a fancy restaurant?

  7. #7
    Jew_jew is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Rate my online profile, please

    to be honest, only couple of times i am not a steak person unless i cook it home myself


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