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    CriticalRap is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Profile review for Criticalrap

    If you're wondering what "swing life away" is all about, it's my favourite song and it's amazeballs if you haven't listen to it, I suggest you do so. Go ahead, I'll wait.

    Done? Sweeeet! Anyway I'm Joe and I'm usual down for anything. Wanna chill out on the beach? Sounds good! Coffee? Also good! Justin Bieber concert? Not unless you're paying and I'm getting extremely drunk!
    I'm always up for a bit of joking around or ball busting

    I like all types of music,Alternative rock, dubstep, house or hiphop but what I listen too changes with what mood I'm in :P

    I've studied Watersports instruction, media and photography amongst other things


    Annyyyyway, that's enough about me, anything else you want to know you will have to ask me about

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    Swagman is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: Profile review for Criticalrap

    I read this and I feel like I'm getting a mini-autobiography about you. It's some good stuff, but cut it down to half of that. Clean out the clutter and leave the really good Fluff remaining for the viewers
    "There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X

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    CriticalRap is offline PUA in Training
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    Default Re: Profile review for Criticalrap

    Okay so I cut it down to

    If you're wondering what "swing life away" is all about, it's my favourite song and it's amazeballs if you haven't listen to it, I suggest you do so. Go ahead, I'll wait. Done? Sweeeet!

    Anyway I'm Joe and I'm usual down for anything. Wanna chill out on the beach? Sounds good! Coffee? Also good! Justin Bieber concert? Not unless you're paying and I'm getting extremely drunk!
    I'm always up for a bit of joking around or ball busting

    Annyyyyway, that's enough about me, anything else you want to know you will have to ask me about

    And I think it does look a lot better this way, thanks for the advice


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