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  1. #1
    GentlemanNoir is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Post Problems with my My POF about me!?

    Hey guys i am Manuel, i recently started really trying to improve my game and testing the online dating game to find some hot women to hand out with, and to obviously f***

    In 2 days i got like 15 visitors, 2 conversations but not with the hot girls i wanted. Noun of them whrote back except one. Plus none of my visitors starts conversation so i was wondering if my about was the problem.

    There it is:

    First off my main language is French but I can defend myself in English but i still do some mistakes so be kind about that.

    Now let me reintroduce myself. Konichiwa Sexy girls!! I would like to say congratulations! By looking at this profile you have demonstrated that you have excellent taste, either that or I've sent you an amazing message and you just have to see what kind of fantastic person I am.

    So What can I say about myself?

    I f***ing LOVE Suits and ties as you can see on my pics. That's why Barney Stinson is my idol and how i meet your mother is the sh*t even do it is time that Ted meets his future wife

    I am a person who likes to relax, have fun and meet new people. I love dancing, reading and eating in good company. I am the kind of guy you can take to mommy for a deep convo and nice dinner than party hard and get retarded in the club by jumping around (but i prefer a sexy slow wine). My favorite hobbies are ... You know what, I do not bite so ask and I'll tell you

    In short if you find me good looking and you want a next-generation guy- who consistently blows your mind with awesomeness and humor, then hit me up. but if you are looking for a douchebag go watch jershey shore

    I really was trying to be funny,laybdack and cool, did i fail at that!?

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    Default Re: Problems with my My POF about me!?

    You gave too much information about yourself, & then came off as being unsure... instead of confident.

    You want to create an air of mystery about yourself & give them an idea of who you are.... let THEM paint the picture in their head, based on your profile, rather than just telling them.

    You'll have more success by creating intrigue, than by being cocky, laid back or too funny.


    Need one on one private coaching? PM me for details.

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    GentlemanNoir is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: Problems with my My POF about me!?

    Ok how would you have done it!?! would this have been better :

    First off my main language is French but I can defend myself in English but i still do some mistakes.

    What can I say about myself?
    I am a person who likes to relax, have fun and meet new people. I love dancing, reading and eating in good company. My favorite hobbies are ... You know what, I do not bite so ask and I'll tell you

    It was my first about me but with so many people putting so much in there about me i was like ok i got to put more


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