I deleted my old low value somewhat AFC profile and replaced it with this. I would like some helpful feedback on what I just put up. Here it is.
I've always had a love hate relationship with vegetables. When I was about six years old I wrestled a turnip. Big deal you say. Well it was a giant turnip. Then along came a cauliflower. Then broccoli. Then a few years later a giant tomato came after me. However, I was prepared this time with a kitchen knife in one hand and a fork in the other. I've eaten my veggies ever since. These days they don't give me a hard time. Fruit on the other hand is another story. I sometimes have issues with strawberries, peaches, pineapple etc. However, if you have some melons for me I might be ok with that.
Let me know what you guys think of this. I know it's a bit on the short side. What should I take out or add(if anything). Also, is the melon thing a bit too much or does it sound cheesy? I like it and think it adds some sexual innuendo but do you think women might think it's cheesy or corny or whatever. Thanks.