Re: Need some advice on my profile pros- HELP
What dave_xxx said, but also: you know the thing about "try not to think of a polar bear"? Well, it's the same. If you say "I'm not creepy", their brain will only remember "creepy" as the first word associated with you.
Guaranteed- 30% less creepy than other profiles
And I'm sure you can find a better thing about you that "I'm not that creepy", right?
You're reminding her she is the one choosing, and that you hope you can pass her test. Bad.
Since you're reading this, I've clearly passed the picture test.
dlv, DLV, DLV. You bring back the other guys - why? She should only be focused on YOU! And don't introduce the next section as "the bad stuff". Again, even if I know what you mean, she will just remember "bad". There is a huge difference:
I'm going to save you the long flowery adjectives that you find on every other profile. Actions speak louder than words so I'll let those do the talking for me. Let's just start with the bad stuff to get that out of the way –
"A really bad thing about me: I'm a romantic" and "I'm a romantic, I know, that's bad."
This is nice, but very much generic. What do you like doing? What is unique about you? What is the thing people notice about you? Right now, I could paste this description to 90% of guys, and that would work.
I'm a hopeless romantic, I'm honest to a fault, I am impulsive and restless at times, prone to flights of imagination and stay up way too late way too often. The evening is so mysterious and I love experiencing it. Anything can happen.
I grew up on the endless beautiful beaches of Miami, love to travel to exotic locations, have an incredible group of friends and have found success in an industry most people only dream about. I believe you get back what you put out in this world.
As you said, actions speak louder than words, so don't bother about describing your personality - it will come across anyway - and describe what you DO in your life
Again, 90% of women fit the description. Don't ask her to be special. Say what YOUR special is. Want a woman that speaks a lot? That's shy? That laughs all the time? What is that small physical thing that you like? A cute nose, long hair, small feet? Make her want to qualify herself, more than "well, I'm not a stripper..."
About you: You're one of a kind, you break the LA stereotype, you sing in the shower, you're not a Stripper
and you 're not here Catfishing. I know those are some big shoes to fill but, if you're someone very special, I'd love to have you along for the ride and make our already great lives that much better.
This... this I liked, a lot Your personnality is starting to come across, and that's funny, good one
FIRST DATE SECTION:
Something simple and not too extravagant. Perhaps a day trip to Paris for some mousse au chocolat and a stroll down the Avenue des Champs-Élysées, or if we’re running short on time I’d settle for alligator wrestling instead.
Seduction is a martial art. Reading books and talking to experts is important, and helpful. But you won't progress unless you go out there and fight.