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    Kvn07 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default rate my 1st profile please

    I figured I might give the online dating thing a crack & I've slapped together a quick profile & would love some feedback.

    should mention that where im from is considered boring & cold. And that's from the people that live here

    I have grown up near XXXXX, I know how boring right?! Life is what you make it my friends!! & besides who wants to live in only one climate lol?
    I run a successful workshop with my dad which I can't wait to take over & become the next budding young entrepreneur I'm all about quality over quantity when it comes to the people in my life, I invest my time in the people that are genuine & don't pretend to be something they're not.
    Sports (watching & being a part of) and being fit, active & healthy would have to be my biggest passion's outside of my work (sounds boring I know but I truly love what I do!!)
    I don't spend a lot of time watching tv or movies, but I do love a broad range of music; anything to get you pumped about life

    be as harsh as u feel necessary, I got big shoulders lol

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    Kvn07 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: rate my 1st profile please

    ...or maybe this one is better? I dunno even just seems plain to me.

    Born & raised in XXXXX, which may sound boring but hey, it's all about the company you keep right?! I'm all about quality over quantity when it comes to the people in my life!
    My big passion at the moment is running & building mine & my dad's business. I've done the travel thing & would love to do more when I know I can pack up for as long as I like & the business can take care of itself
    Outside of work im all about sport & keeping fit in the gym (ugh that sounds so cliché lol) so I don't watch a lot of tv or movies but have a pretty broad taste in music. Anything that gets the emotions flowing!

    I seem to have hit a blank on this one lol

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    Default Re: rate my 1st profile please

    Well since am only seeing this bit and not the whole onto the text you written.am judging just based on your post.

    Born & raised in XXXXX, which may sound boring but hey, it's all about the company you keep right?!

    You are asking a question in a way the poses you as unsure of yourself
    its not bad but the born and raised is a bit cliche and you don't need to tell them where you were born.

    if you must go with it:Born in xx. <-- Leave it as that


    I'm all about quality over quantity when it comes to the people in my life!
    This ones ok.


    My big passion at the moment is running & building mine & my dad's business.
    Am passionate about my business which i run alongside my dad.Most times i work on his too.


    I've done the travel thing & would love to do more when I know I can pack up for as long as I like & the business can take care of itself

    Nope this is good but not really that necessary in terms of waiting for your business to take off.


    Outside of work im all about sport & keeping fit in the gym (ugh that sounds so cliché lol) so I don't watch a lot of tv or movies but have a pretty broad taste in music. Anything that gets the emotions flowing!

    remove that sounds cliche and state that you love keeping fit find a way to pose it if you think its that cliche.I do not watch lots of tv. <--Good
    stating you love music and why will also be ok.

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    Kvn07 is offline PUA Forums Respected Contributor
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    Default Re: rate my 1st profile please

    thanks mate

    after doing some research, updating & changing I have a profile im pretty happy with. username is K_aus87 on POF.

    I stole bits & pieces from all over the place & I'm not trying to take any credit for it.

    would just like to see if I should add anything or if I'm on the right track & ready to start sending messages.

    Cheers

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    Default Re: rate my 1st profile please

    Currently not using pof, you could send me via another route if you may


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