well, im new here and this is my firts post, there is this girl i have been messaging through fb, and last night i got her number, however it seemed reluctant, i would like someone to criticise my "text game"
what am i doing correctly/incorrectly?
me: lol, you coming moon later? (moon is the name of a bar)
no reply till later that night (fb said she diddnt see it)
hb7: oo i diddntsee this! how was it?
me: was fun! allways is with me and X, should have come along
hb7: was x there? lol me and X wondered!
me: yep, so what did you and X get up to?
hb7:not much, we just went round our friends for abit :/ you back at home?
me: yep too late. you missed me :P
hb7:hahaha AH MAYN i was gona come moon!
hb7: do you feel like niel armstrong when you land at the moon? i do
ME:LOL nah, feel abit more like buzz aldrin tbh
me: (the other guy that landed on the moon with him)
me: sorry im being patronising, idk how smart you are hahaha jk lol
hb7: nah i diddnt know that
hb7: at least you know i aint a liar lol
me: good to know
me: youre rubbish at replying to fb messages!
me: i demend to know your number!
hb7: i know im just chilling atm
hb7: YOU DEMAND
hb7: i dont like demands
me: i request?
me: cammon, i aint gonna call you all the time lol, just see when youre about
me: well im off to bed, nighty night x
hb7: night night ) xx
so can i please get some criticism on this?