Re: hey can I get a critique here
Get rid of your first three pictures. They are intimidating and add nothing. They make you look like a rapist tbh.
Cut all of this:
"I don't like things that are safe and easy I think that's boring. I'm trying to get out and do some traveling. I think that couch surfing is an awesome idea."
Re-write the entire "I'm really good at" section. Don't mention the ukulele or drawing there since you've already mentioned it above. Generally, I think you should put something playful and something serious in this section.
Your entire first thing people notice section reeks of confidence issues. We all see you have glasses, you don't need to put that. Find something unique, maybe ask a friend. If you want to stick with a gritty sense of humor, say that and then try to show it a bit. But don't say "I get laughs sometimes." That just sounds sad.
Again, your spends a lot of time thinking about sounds sad and longing. It sounds like you do a lot of thinking about things but you never do much of doing those things.
This quote, "Either hanging out with my friends at their place or kicking back at home. I'd like to get out more since I've become such a bore since leaving San Diego. " is definitely something that girls are NOT going to love. Why would anyone want to hangout with a bore?
You have a long ways to go with this. You're going to have to revamp the whole thing. Basically start from scratch and be positive about yourself.
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."