Re: why ddn she respond?
There's two potential things that I see causing this to happen. The first one is that she may not be interested in you. The second thing is that it looks like you tried escalating things too quickly.
The attraction process is as follows: you begin with a rapport stage, doing light banter and building up small amounts of rapport as you go. The conversations should always be fun and positive. Your next step is to escalate steadily into sexual talk. After that, it's all a matter of working the magic.
It looks like you tried to go into overdrive with escalation. That last message also looked borderline pervy, so that's another problem. Escalation, as I stated, should be a gradual process. Do it too fast and she will think you are just horny. In addition, you need to be flirting beforehand and always driving the interaction in an entertaining way. If you miss any of these elements, your game falls apart.
I would recommend searching around on the forums and doing some reading on the attraction process. You can find a ton of resources, and I think that would be the most beneficial to improving your game.
"There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X