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    GJammin is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default OKCupid Profile Sample.

    Take a look at my OK Cupid profile. I would appreciate any advice/insite.

    I'll return the favor or give advice if I can to anyone posting in here. Let's all help each other out.

    okcupid.com /profile/-NotANiceGuy-

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    Default Re: OKCupid Profile Sample.

    This is pretty good for the most part. There's only a few changes I recommend:

    1. Change your profile picture. It looks too sleazy. The one with you standing on the balcony in front of the palm tree is awesome.
    2. Check the grammar of your profile. There are some parts where the spelling is incorrect.
    3. Take out the thing about Myspace in "the six things I can't do without". Myspace is pretty much dead, and a lot of people may ridicule that or just look at you as having no life.
    4. Take out anything related to politics and religion, especially that bit on being a committed atheist. Politics and religion generally fit poorly into the dating spectrum, and having that on your profile may kill your chances. If it won't let you change your religious and political stances, say "Undisclosed".
    5. Change your profile bit about thinking. Because you say that your lack of time for thinking has drawn you into the online dating scene, you are also giving off The Vibe that you are far too busy for normal dating. When things move off of the internet and into real life with a girl, will you be able to commit any of your time to her for dates, meetups and such?


    Other than that, great stuff. The second half of your profile is extremely solid.
    "There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X

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    GJammin is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: OKCupid Profile Sample.

    Solid advice, good sir. Thank you for taking the time to look my profile over and critique it. I was surprised at your suggestion to remove the part about being a committed athiest, but as I'm thinking about it now, I can see why you pointed this out. It can come out later in conversation after I've initiated attraction.

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    GJammin is offline Aspiring PUA
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    Default Re: OKCupid Profile Sample.

    I put up the picture of myself with the two girls in the bar as my main picture to try and dhv myself, to show that I'm preselected by women. It didn't occur to me this could be sleasy. Guys, should I leave it on the profile amongst the pictures, or delete it all together?

    okcupid.com /profile/-NotANiceGuy-

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    Default Re: OKCupid Profile Sample.

    I would recommend to just get rid of that photo from your profile. The other ones a good, especially the one with your daughter. It's cute, and it shows a softer, fatherly side to you instead of the "I'm kind of an asshole" statement that you make on your front page. That can be a major plus when having people look at your profile.
    "There is no better than adversity. Every defeat, every heartbreak, every loss, contains its own seed, its own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time." - Malcolm X


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