By stating you get bored easily doesn’t make you badass. It just makes you sound like a boring guy and even lacking focus and commitment potential (i.e. her).
I always try and state positive attractive virtues about myself that ALL women find attractive. What are some of the things ALL women find attractive? Strength, being a provider, a protector, a committed partner, successful (wealthy and healthy), creative, smart, funny, confident, have a skill or talent, caring, honest, has goals in life. Every woman, no matter who they are, are hardwired biologically to seek out certain virtues. If you can at least tick some of those virtue boxes you can increase your appeal to a wide range of women. Get that system or structure down and then add humour/cockiness like seasoning afterwards.
Personally I avoid stating micro details like hobbies/interests (film, book) or comparisons (Beiber, Biffy) because you could potentially push away girls who may dislike those things and every other guy craps on about that stuff. For example I often see people write things like ‘I like dogs’ but what if there are cute girls out there that are cat lovers? They may not respond on principle. It’s better to gain fundamental attraction with as many women as possible before introducing hobbies and your detailed likes/dislikes in life unless you are going for a specific target like a Goth or gym head. Later you can cull the ones who are not into similar things as you, if that's important.
Rather than using comparisons or giving them a ‘glimpse’ it’s much better to just state confidently up front what you are instead of hiding it or relying on an unknown 3rd person opinion. Say ‘I am a smart, funny, good looking, confident guy who is passionate about life and likes to have fun. I have a smile you can sail a ship on and my pet rock has never run away from me’ (the virtues will sink into her subconcious and the smile/rock part will hopefully get her curious or giggling - especially if your photo demonstrates that). By stating that you are demonstrating your confidence, rather than saying 'people say I look like this'. Say things with 100% conviction. Then go on to work out or integrate some unique/funny creative ways of proving or expressing that whilst adding some mystery. You could take all sorts of angles to elaborate: ‘Here I am in a spiral arm of the milky way galaxy, looking at all these beautiful twinkling stars through my sapphire blue eyes telescope – shooting stars are whizzing by and I’m going to catch the best one, how I wonder who you are?’ or remember how many girls love vampire stuff ‘I’m a tall handsome vampire…piercing charming eyes...well groomed – seductive - I need someone to sink my teeth into…are you willing to be immortal with me? I'll protect you from the werewolves haha’. These are off the top of my head, make your own up, but they should evidence your attractive virtues without being too serious.
Girls browse hundreds of profiles so you need to get a memorable hook (shooting star, vampire, whatever) and your virtues advertised quickly and effectively. Don’t rely on or sheepishly ask women writing to you 'drop me a line' (it's not innovative and thus boring) if your profile is good they will naturally want to write. Ensure your profile locks them in enough to write back if you are writing to them. Your hook hopefully can also help spark the initial conversation forward rather than being an interview. You can keep it short as you can reveal your virtues in one confident sentence and demonstrate it with one creative hook, paragraph or story. Less is more. They are not there to read a novel or learn your biography and unless you're Shakespeare the more you write the more chance you have to say something stupid.
Change your headline to something you DO have or something you ARE rather than weakly trying to distance yourself from 'creepy' idiots who post with their shirts off.
Have a good photo/photos. One formal with relatively nice clothes but maybe not a full suit and tie. One relaxed, happy and casual and one with you doing something interesting that perhaps is full body (i.e. on holiday or out having fun) unless your fat.