I'll post me and the girl's text and someone critique it for me:
Me:Hey, you never did tell me about that book you were reading( some book she was reading and never told me what it was about)
Herh I didn't?
Memg, you got the memories of a 70 years old lady!!!!
Her: I've been told
Me: alright let's get back to you explaining that book to me now.
Her: I just started it
Me: who cares, let's hear about the stories of the 10 pages you've read so far
Her:idk these two kids randomly turned Intl zombies at school and killed 30 and now this government zombie squad is after them and they ran away into a funeral home
Meretty boring so far... Explain why you're reading this again?
Her: this is why I rarely text you back lol.
Me: is it because I'm super cool and you're jealous ?
Her: no it's because you're obnoxious
Me:Aww I'm a nice guy (just said this because I couldn't think of anything else to say
Her: Sure I GUESS
ME: So what are you doing tonight?
Her: playing video games
Me: what are you playing?
Me:aye! PS3 OR Xbox?
Me: sooo close, you were cool until you said Xbox
Her: you were sooo cool until you replied
Me:touché. Did you find the secret mission for the bag of weed in the guy's car trunk?
Her: I finished the game
Me: which ending.doc you pick?
Her: the one where neither died
Me:hmmm I never picked that one before
Her: oh okay
Me: let's play would you rather( trying to Phase Shift but she didn't reply yet)
Anyway I tried cocky funny and came off as obnoxious as she said, critique and help needed. Backstory, I already build rapport and can meet up with her but I need a car and she got a bf but she shows ioi . Let's hear it guys